Jump to content

Untroubled (by Taniya_K) - comments


mk1diva

Recommended Posts

Great chapter :D

Like everyone else, I loved how they just sat there at the end. Aden's responce to his dad's death was so believeable, you wrote that brilliantly! I also liked the tension between Nicole and Belle, they both love Aden is different ways, too cute :)

Can't wait for more!!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Replies 872
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Top Posters In This Topic

jeez mate! could you have made that chapter any longer! :P good as :D

the ending was AOL worthy, they way aden didn't want to talk, just sit there with Belle :wub:

Geoff's such a dill :P he just doesn't know...

and cause i missed the chap before,

“Bet he would buy you a dress.” Belle heard her mumbled as she got up from her seat and crossed her as she dropped her bowl and spoon into the sink before exiting the room, leaving behind one very confused Belle.

:lol: Nic's great,

and i love that Aden gave Belle something of his Mums, it just shows how much he loves her, considering how little of her stuff he actually has <3

great updates, looking forward to more : )

Link to comment
Share on other sites

ooo a possible 55 chapters....I am not complaining!!!!!! :)

That was a sad chapter, poor Aden!!!!!!!

I love Belle and Nicole's relationship, one minute they are fighting and the next they are getting along..they are so alike!!

Can't wait for more!!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

oh my god, i just read from page 20 to here, since 10am this morning [three hours ago!] - it certainly helped the morning at work fly past [yes i worked as well!!]

have tears in my eyes after reading that last chapter; you write with amazing talent girl, seriously - i could honestly see this being part of a tv series .... wow ... can't believe i have to sit and wait for updates like everyone else now! :huh:

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue.