Untroubled (by Taniya_K) - comments

[wrongturntaken]

Sorry i was too tired to comment yesterday! It was awesome, poor Aden, that was so sad! I loved Nicole's reactions to everything and the way Belle just sat with him at the end was aol!!

Can't wait for the next update!

[leah1234]

just wondering if there will be an update tonigh?????????

I would just like to say that this is by far my favourit fic because you capture everyting so perfectly.

[adelle]

Awwwwww "you have me" :wub:

You write Aden's pain so well! Fantastic chapter, worth the wait

Isn't Belle just the perfect girlfriend? She really knows how to handle Aden

Update soon

[LAURZY!]

WOW that was unbelievable!! definately a tear jerker!

The part were she was comforting him when he was hyperventilating and the last bit was just so emotional and powerful

Really really great update, cannot wait for the next chapter

[H&A_diehard]

OMG, that was a great chapter. Don't apologise for it being late, it was worth staying up for. What an immense chapter, there aren't any words.

I just badly want to hug Aden now.

[monkeysmoke]

my heartstrings were being plucked away one by one. That was really really really well done. like, absolutely spot on. I odn't know what else to type in this comment to do justice to you. Other than that definately made up for no Diwana - above and beyond missus.

[H&A_diehard]

my heartstrings were being plucked away one by one. That was really really really well done. like, absolutely spot on. I odn't know what else to type in this comment to do justice to you. Other than that definately made up for no Diwana - above and beyond missus.

I had the same problem (no words to describe just how good that was!) and anyone who knows me would tell you I never, ever get lost for words.

[meant2live]

Wow loved it lots and lots and lots and lots

That was just sooo... raw!

If I was a crying person... then I would have cried.

Can't wait for more... and I still wanna know what the present is

[Taniya_K]

Isn't Belle just the perfect girlfriend? She really knows how to handle Aden

I wanted to make her seem understanding, but as I read it through, I dunno. It just seems to be that she's tooperfect? Do you get what I mean? And Aden, sometimes? Hmm... Ah well, these are my characters in my fic, right? I'll keep them the way I want to!

my heartstrings were being plucked away one by one. That was really really really well done. like, absolutely spot on. I odn't know what else to type in this comment to do justice to you. Other than that definately made up for no Diwana - above and beyond missus.

I had the same problem (no words to describe just how good that was!) and anyone who knows me would tell you I never, ever get lost for words.

Aw!

Thanks you guys! I don't think it makes up for Diwana at all! Or anyone not being able to be lost for words...

Anyway, thanks for the comments everyone! I've just decided that this fic will be 50 chapters! At least, that's how it's planning out to be. I dunno if it'll work or not, but I hope it will. Which means that it might be finished by the end of the weekend

xoxo

[wrongturntaken]

WOW! That was sooooo my COMPLETELY FAVOURITE CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!! I have tears in my eyes now, i loved that you did most of it from Belle's POV... and that nightmare in the middle of the night and her reaction to him was just...aol sadly. Then that bit at the end where Aden wouldn't listen to her telling him to stop to start with... that just fitted so perfectly! I could understand why he would do that, and then what she said to him and how you finished it off...

I just cannot describe the absolute amazingness, brilliance, excellence, fantasticness, wonderfulness that this chapter was! Your writing makes it all the more impacting! I don't know what i can write to actually explain how good this chapter really was! definitely worth the wait, and i agree with monkeysmoke, makes up for no diwana!