Jody Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 I don't read any fanfiction for only 6 days then I come back and you have already wrapped up your other fic and got to chapter 6 six on your new one. I can't tell you what a treat that was for me. I'm glad you're adding a little angst in this one. As much as I love Adelle fluff some angst is good to. I love that the problems you have them going through seems like realistic relationship problems. I really want to go back point out everything that I love but 6 chapters is just to long to read through again and remember everything I like. Just know that I am already enjoying this as much as the last one even if they aren't as carefree and happy as they were in the last one. Love that we got some Mattie and Belle scenes. Belle really needs a friend now with Aden acting so distant. Felt so sorry for Belle in that last line. Quote
xknomex Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 its a boy auction! like the one in OTH although i do love the fact that its all realsitic i hope the relationship problems arn't going to make them have a small break up cause i dont think i could cope with a break up in the show and here as well update soon xx Quote
Taniya_K Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Would I ever break Adelle up?! *looks shifty* Quote
wrongturntaken Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 I really enjoyed that chapter! It was really realistic! Was the password 'nine' because she has nine charms or something like that? I'm probably wrong, lol cos then she'd have to constantly change it every time she got a new one! Ah, well now i'm at a loss! I can't wait for the next update! Quote
Taniya_K Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Close, but not quite. She only has 8 charms. At the moment anyway. xoxo Quote
xknomex Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 i think its nine cause they have been going out for nine months, i'm proberly wrong though Quote
Taniya_K Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Well, this is one thing where I can say that you are right! Not that I'm saying that your guesses for the other password is right or wrong lol! Quote
Lise Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 That was a good angsty chapter! I don't mind the odd bit of angst in amongst lots of fluff...keeps it interesting. Can't wait to read more. Quote
xknomex Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Well, this is one thing where I can say that you are right! Not that I'm saying that your guesses for the other password is right or wrong lol! yay i've never guessed right before! Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Really good! Keep writing!!! XD Quote
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