leah1234 Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 aaw poor tess and tyler i wonder what happened to tyler i'm guessing he was abused like aden update soon xxxxx
LauraPhilly!! Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 reali gud chapter cnt w8 2 read more poor Tess, nd Belle isn't there @ the exact time that Tess needs her most xXx
Taniya_K Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Absolutely brilliant! Seriously, you did it justice. Maybe even more than that. I loved how you had it from both their POVs, although mainly Tess's when they were actually on the bed. Her reasonings were so realistic and I can understand why she would think that. Tyler's were just sad and I have to wonder what it is that happened to him. I'm guessing that it's similar as to what happened to Aden, but I guess I'll have to wait and see. Personally, I'm glad that they didn't sleep together, and I like the parallel between this scene [although it was Tess stopping them] and the Adelle one when he called her a skank, only Tyler told her that he was using her. Great! Your writing and description, as always, was perfectly awesome. I dunno what else I can say except that it was a fab chapter! Cannot wait for more whatsoever! xoxo
xknomex Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 wow that was a good chapter!!! Poor Tess and Tyler, the descriptions of how they were feeling was so well written!!! Cant wait to see the next chapter! x
LAURZY! Posted December 27, 2008 Report Posted December 27, 2008 Awww no! i'm really intrigued as to whats happened in Tyler's past, heopefully he can talk to Aden about it! I feel so sorry for the both of them! That was a great update, very well written hun
Lise Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 That was awesome! You most certainly did it justice. I wonder if Tyler's past is similar to Aden's. I liked the similarity's between that scene and the Aden and Belle "skank" scene. I, also, wonder who the guy at the door was? Really, can't wait for the next chapter.
Jody Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 Brilliant chapter. The way you wrote the Tyler/Tess scene you could almost feel how uncomfortable Tess was starting to feel. Tess worry that if she stopped it would seem like she was a tease was so realistic. And Tyler trying to keep going reminded me so much of Aden. I love that you gave us both of their thoughts. Another thing, was how both of them stuck to showing anger yet the second they were alone they both broke down. Although I have to say I loved this scene alot more than the original Aden/Belle one on the show. I felt alot more sorry for Tyler than I did for Aden at the time(even though I understood his reasons). It was good to see Tyler has heartbroken about it as Tess. That was a really great scene. I can't wait till Aden and Belle come back. It will be interesting to see their reactions, especially Adens. Once again I'm not sure if Aden is going to be more understanding towards Tyler because of his own experiance or play the protective dad role. Either one will be good. And looking forward to a nice Tess/Belle scene. I almost forgot about the man that came. I want to know more about him. I'm still going with it being Larry. But knowing me I'll probably be wrong. Please update soon.
wrongturntaken Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 probably, i've started it but i'm not sure how long it'll take. Thanks for asking.
xknomex Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 thats okay, thanks for replying will look forward to it whenever its done
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