LAURZY! Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Belle! That made me tear up, god that must of been frightning!! I hope she tells Aden what he did, Angelo needs to be locked up Looking forward to reading more
Taniya_K Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 :o Omg I'm still shocked that it was Angelo!!! Brilliant chapter! Absolutely... wow! Poor Belle. I can't believe he would say something like that, blackmail her, to make her sleep with him. Not even that... I dunno what else to say. It was that great! I definately cannot wait for more! Please say you'll update really soon [like now???] xoxo
wrongturntaken Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Omg I'm still shocked that it was Angelo!!! Brilliant chapter! Absolutely... wow! Poor Belle. I can't believe he would say something like that, blackmail her, to make her sleep with him. Not even that... I dunno what else to say. It was that great! I definately cannot wait for more! Please say you'll update really soon [like now???] xoxo lol, thanks, probably not now but i think tomorrow. Glad you like it... btw... things are about to get worse...
Taniya_K Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Don't say things like that! Do you not want me to sleep tonight?!!?!?!? I understand about the not updating now [was worth the try ]. Cannot wait for the next chapter at all... And, lol, I didn't like it, I loved it! xoxo
LAURZY! Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Worse?! how can it get any worse!!! Cannot wait to read the next update!!
LauraPhilly!! Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Omg, dnt make it worse!!! Ok make fine... make it worse, but belle has 2 tell aden wat hapnd its only fair x x x
jenpen08 Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Omg Angelo is pure Evil!! Soo well written! Worse? how could it possibly get any worse!! Awesome update!!
Symphony Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 OH MY GOD! I wasn't expecting him to be so vile, or ... violent! Cant imagine poor Angelo like that - but poor Belle even moreso. She was sat staring blankly at the opposite wall when the kids approached the bathroom. They all saw her, but she didn't see their eyes widen or hear their quiet collective intake of horrified breath.The boys retreated in shock and some sentiment of respect, but Tess stayed closer although still keeping some distance. That paragraph really hit me; whatever way you'd written it, it was just like a punch to the stomach. I don't know if i want to read the next chapter - i get the feeling it's going to be upsetting Heart is really going out to Belle right now.... And to Aden & tyler too; when they get home and realise something is wrong. Well, Tyler's already there, but it's going to hit him hard too, I think, to find out that Belle was nearly raped? If he does.... Ok I'm rambling. I wait in horrified suspense... Symphony, you're jealous of my writing skills? What have you done in the last couple of days i wonder, anyone met Todd recently? laugh.gif I am soooo jealous of you!!!! (although he did reply to me on facebook a couple of times so its alright, not as good as meeting him though, lol). Besides... you're an amazing writer anyway! lol, i'm still jealous of your writing skills that's awesome that he replied to you x
Inactive User Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Great work! Update soon Poor Belle. Angelo is a idiot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Ahh Belle!! Noo thats awful.. poor thing I hope Aden gets a hold of Angelo.. he would Throttle him
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