Lise Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 That was pure brillance! You had me hooked the whole chapter. I hope that Belle tells Aden. I think that the kids probably will if she doesn't, though. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter now!
Jody Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Wow! You are awesome. At the end of that chapter when he arrived I didn't think about Angelo. His part in the other story completely slipped my mind. Only when I read it was him did all that come back to me. So I was absolutley shocked about that. He is so evil. He really is. Somehow he managed to be more vile then he was the in the first story. But I couldn't stop reading. It was written perfectly. Poor Belle, for having to go through that. Poor Tess, Tyler, and Mark, for having to find her in that state. I can't wait for what's coming up next, especially Aden's reaction. Also this is bound to have the kids asking some questions. I wonder if they are going to have to explain what happened in the past to them. Please update soon.
Zetti Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Wow. The Angelo and Belle scene made me cringe inside but you wrote it so well. I am so disgusted at the thought of Angelo anywhere near Belle but you wrote it really well. Not liking the sound of things getting worse. Please dont make it actually happen, I dont think I could stand it, I look forward to your next chapter whenever you get a chance to update.
xknomex Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 :o Poor poor Belle!!! I cant believe Angelo came back! thats just.... horrible! Cant wait for Aden to come, I'm really intrigued to see how he will react! Update soon xxx oh and thanks for the house plan
MissOlivia22 Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Oh my gosh! Belle Gosh, whats Aden gunna do and poor Belle. Maybe it will be triggering to Tyler as well. And it is meant to get worse. Gosh XD Bit of a short time limit, but any chance you will have an update within the next hour. I have to go out and was wondering whether there was any point checking here before I go. Thanks
wrongturntaken Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Oh my gosh! Belle Gosh, whats Aden gunna do and poor Belle. Maybe it will be triggering to Tyler as well. And it is meant to get worse. Gosh XD Bit of a short time limit, but any chance you will have an update within the next hour. I have to go out and was wondering whether there was any point checking here before I go. Thanks No, i'm afraid. I'm hoping it should be between nine and ten UK time. Thanks for asking though, and thanks for the review!
MissOlivia22 Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 Oh Ok! I should be home around 11 and can't wait to read it
wrongturntaken Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 I'm really sorry cos i know i said i'd update, i'm just having trouble with the chapter. I'm not happy with it at all and i'm getting tired now, i think it'll be better if i work on it tomorrow. I will DEFINITELY update tomorrow though, and it could be sooner than the evening (UK). Since i feel bad i'll give you a sneak peek of the one thing that i'm fairly happy with. He breathed deeply, holding back his emotions had been hard but his determination to be strong for Belle meant he was a rock in her presence, only letting what she had said truly hit him when he was alone. He walked slowly and calmly back to the bathroom, locking the door behind him. Approaching the mirror above the sink, he stared at his reflection, wondering how they had managed to cope with these feelings and events when they were both so young. So barely above their daughters age and they had been through so much. His hands rested on the basin; clutching it tightly in anger and hate, as he clenched his teeth. He ran a hand through his hair before slowly turning on the cold tap; cupping the water in his hands and splashing it over his face, hoping it would wash away the emotions he knew were about to break through. As his energy drained and the lump swelled in his throat he could hold it back no longer and fell on to his knees. He spotted specks of blood on the floor and a foot or so away lay a razor. He wondered who had been the victim of it but knew Belle would have told him if she had been hurt. He let out the slightest of chuckles at his wife's resilience before completely crashing out as his tears cascaded and he tried to keep his sobs silent for fear of Belle hearing him as well as the three teenagers downstairs. It might change a bit before it gets posted. I really am sorry... *begs forgiveness* ...and thank you so much for all the comments, they are what spur me to keep writing! ...and coming up: Who's in danger? Someone spills a secret. Is there more to Tyler's story?
Taniya_K Posted January 23, 2009 Report Posted January 23, 2009 It's not your fault! Trust me, this fic is WELL worth the wait, even if the waiting does drive me crazy That sneak peek was interesting. I feel so sorry for Aden Cannot wait for the whole chappie! And I'm not liking the 'coming up' stuff xoxo
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