matticus01 Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 OH MY ................ that was so sweet, but I cant believe Aden was stabbed Brilliant, update soon Quote
mk1diva Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 omg that was amazing the flashbacks were great and the bit where they had eye contact was just so.... But no belle in danger??? Quote
Taniya_K Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 OMG that was just wow! I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Quote
adelle Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 I can't believe I missed this update!! Poor Aden, I wonder who is after him?? And Belle... Great chapter, update soon Quote
Jody Posted September 24, 2008 Report Posted September 24, 2008 Just read the last two chapters. The flashbacks are amazing. You truly made me feel how weak and pathetic Aden must feel because he couldn't defend himself. I like how open he was during the interview. It's good that you made Gavin a little more compassionate after that, it would have been very unrealistic if he didn't care cause I don't think anyone could listen to a story like that and not feel something, even someone like Gavin who doesn't seem to care about anyone. The scene with Aden and Rachel was really good. It truly showed how he feels like he doesn't anyones help. The scene with Belle and Aden looking at each other, I don't think I have ever read someone describe two people looking into each others eyes and getting lost in the moment so beautifully. I looking to the mystery about who's after Aden. They have sure gone to a lot trouble to make him suffer. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 1, 2008 Report Posted October 1, 2008 Can't wait for the next update... (Get my drift?!?) Please soon Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted October 1, 2008 Report Posted October 1, 2008 Wow, i love this fic... just read it all Hope Aden&Belle get together sooon!! Can't wait for you to update! Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 Brillian chapter! I actually spent about 2 mintues trying to figure out what the anagram for Angelo's card was, but all I could make out was Belle. I'm glad you told us what it was otherwise I would have gone crazy trying to figure it out! Can't wait for an update! I wonder who climbed in through her window and what they're gonna do to her! Hope you keep her safe! xoxo Quote
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