Zetti Posted August 31, 2008 Report Posted August 31, 2008 "…but not being near you hurts!" Aden exclaimed to her and he saw the flicker of emotion in her face that told him she would feel the same way as soon as she left the room. "You feel that too; don't you?" "…but that's a wound that time can heal," Belle told him swallowing back her tears watching as he tried to keep his own under control. "Why can't time heal all wounds?" Aden yelled at her softly as he had no anger to yell at her with, he knew he had no right. Are you purposally making me cry? Awesome start Quote
mk1diva Posted August 31, 2008 Report Posted August 31, 2008 Great start! Alothought the flashback had me in tears what is it with adelle lol Updates soon please Quote
xknomex Posted August 31, 2008 Author Report Posted August 31, 2008 WOW this fan fic is good!! i love the way you are writing it!!! that ending was brilliant! i could see it happening, i love the friendship between melody and aden! Quote
whispered_envy Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 Oooo...this is intriguing me too! Really like how you've written it! Can't wait for more! Quote
h&a-girl Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 Really good! Want to read more!! Quote
mk1diva Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 great update really well written I can see this sought of scene happening in the show! Quote
jenlee Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 I love it, it's so sad, update soon Quote
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