Deborah Posted November 1, 2008 Report Posted November 1, 2008 I'm intrigued now, what did he do in her room! Another great update Thank you Quote
Inactive User Posted November 1, 2008 Report Posted November 1, 2008 Great part. Adelle so cute until they got busted by the cops! Update soon-wanting to read more please! Quote
matticus01 Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 omg what did he do? and Belle's plan to make Aden jealous. . ... nice! and then pushing him and repeating herself, I could just imagine her doing that on the show but what did he do? update soon, I need to know Quote
SAM27# Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 oooo what did he do in Belle's room..I am thinking put a present in there..thats what I am hoping!!! Can't believe this fic is coming to an end!!!! But there is a sequel Update soon...I am really intrigued to know what Aden did!! Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 *tear* That was just so sweet! I loved that he made her face her fears! That's just so Aden! And it was a bit funny lol. AOL to the ending! How sweet! I was almost as it the roles were reversed compared to then they first slept together. I can't belive that this is over. But I do remember you mentioning a sequel... when will that be up?! I cannot wait for more! xoxo Quote
monkeysmoke Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 The position they had fallen into meant that their faces were just centimetres away from one another and they were swept into the silence that had already claimed the room, unable to speak now, for their feelings were too loud for sound. I thought that line was really clever. Great place to end it! Very much liked the window bit, seemed appropriate and quite sweet. *tear* so sad its over. xxx Quote
xknomex Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Posted November 2, 2008 *tear* I cant believe that was the last chapter:( That last chapter was perfect. I wasn't expecting that that's what he had done in her room but it made perfect sense. The ending was so sweet! I agree with Tanyia, it was like the roles were reversed. This whole fic was written so beautifully. well done! xx Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 WOW, that was THE perfect ending, Loved the window idea, it was so sweet The last bit got me weeping, it was brilliant! The whole fic has been amazing to read, cant believe its over!!!! Loved it all Quote
Deborah Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 Aww, that was so sweet, especially the ending, got me all emotional now! And I love that he helped her overcome her fear with the window. Loved it, it was all brilliant. Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 2, 2008 Report Posted November 2, 2008 Oh my word, that was quite possibly the sweetest thing i have ever read! Just amazing.....Thank you very much Quote
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