Proud and Prejudiced (by Miranda) - comments

[LAURZY!]

Charlie's run off with Roman!! Love that hahaha

Great as per Looking forward to reading more!

[QUIET ACHIEVER]

A marvellous nail biting chapter Miranda.

Dr Holden is a wise and helpful man, if only people listened to his warnings. I'm glad that Mr Buckton took Belle with him as she might be the only person to get through to her.

I look forward to the continuing adventures of Captain Harris and Miss Buckton.

[Miranda]

Once again, I want to say thank you to everyone for posting their appreciation on this thread . I have so enjoyed writing it. I am especially pleased with Skykat's comment that my fic is a little ray of sunshine, because that is what the fic has been to me during the current times of economising. I wish there were more comedy stories on this forum, although I admit I haven't read all of the ones currently being written, so maybe I've missed them.

I chose Morag and Ross to be the Bennetts because their family with daughters seemed to fit better, as Geoff seemed to fit the dithering Mr Bingley better

I shall keep you all in suspense as to what happens to Miss Charlotte and the dastardly Captain

[Skykat]

The scene would have reminded Belle of a Western motion picture, except that they had not been invented yet, so it did not.

That might be my favourite line ever!

You're welcome about the ray of sunshine and thanks for explaininmg your character choices, iI always love to see the justification behind things, its the lawyer in me.

Another couple of great chapters, so Charlie's done a runner with Rambo Roman and Campbell and Jeffries to the rescue! I love this story, interesting characters, great dialogue and plenty of comedy moments. What's not to like, please keep it coming.

[LAURZY!]

^^ quite possibly my fave line of the whole thing aswell

This fic is so good, really different from the others, really great change

Love all the characters and how they interact with each other

I kinda hope they dont find Charlie lol, love the idea of Geoff and Aden riding off into the sunset to try and be the Buckton's knights in shining armour!!

[QUIET ACHIEVER]

An amazing chapter with plenty of anger, drama and suspense.

It looks like Mr Campbell might get a second chance with Miss Nicole after all, judging by the reaction of Belle. I can just imagine an angry Mr Buckton with fire coming out from both ears.

So Miss Jones to become Mrs Morgan... mmmm. At least it was a mutual decision, but who on earth is Mr Morgan?

Please continue this fine fiction.

[Miranda]

Yes, I have got a bit carried away with the idea of Geoff and Aden riding off to the rescue. I like the idea so much that I may write a Western one day- I can just imagine those two as outlaw gunslingers, riding across the High Chaparral past the Blue Ridge Mountains to the wide Missouri, evading the sheriff and his posse Hmm... [thinks and imagines possible plots for this story...]

[rokkafella125]

Yes, I have got a bit carried away with the idea of Geoff and Aden riding off to the rescue. I like the idea so much that I may write a Western one day- I can just imagine those two as outlaw gunslingers, riding across the High Chaparral past the Blue Ridge Mountains to the wide Missouri, evading the sheriff and his posse Hmm... [thinks and imagines possible plots for this story...]

me too sounds..... yummy!

x

[Deborah]

I love your fic Miranda!

Loving the idea of Aden & Geoff riding off to the rescue also I wonder if they will find Charlie & Roman?

Looking forward to next update.

[Red Ranger 1]

My enjoyment of this fiction continues unabated.My thanks once again.