xknomex Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Finally he knows YAY!!!! Brilliant couple of chapters!!!! Update soon xxx Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Awwww I'm so glad he didnt leave her there! Absolutely loved it, great writing once again hun Quote
Deborah Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Aww what an absolutely brilliant chapter!!! You captured all the turmoil in Aden's mind so well. Really looking forward to more Quote
xknomex Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 AOL!!! It made it even more special that there was only a couple lines of dialogue.!! That has to be my favourite chapter so far!!! It was so sweet and it was so realistic. Well Done. Update soon xxx Quote
Beate Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Aww, that was so sweet. I love how he finally came around. And the way you descibed him looking at the ultrasound pictures and realising. I only got two words. Awesome writing. More soon please, I'm hooked. lol Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Gosh that was just... there are no words for it! Brilliant, awesome... I can't think of a perfect way to describe it. I loved it all. I loved how even with just two lines of dialogue, you actually portrayed teh whole scene beautifully and it was so easy to imagine and see. I cannot wait for more! So glad that Aden stayed and I hope he doesn't pull away in the morning or something. More soon please! xoxo Quote
meant2live Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 yay yay yay... those last few chapters were amazing.. and soooo soooo cute So happy that he knows now and that he's stayed with her... hopefully it can be nice and straight forward for a while now at least lve love lvoe it more soon please Quote
wrongturntaken Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 OMG that was one of the sweetest things i have ever read!!! I nearly cried, it was just so beautiful, the changing reactions of the characters, especially Aden, worked so well. It fitted with everything perectly!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!! Pleaes make it soon!!!!! Quote
rfran Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 wow I went out and came home to this, so happy he's accepted it. I love your Aden. Can't wait for more. Quote
homeandawayforever23 Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 I just read the whole thing. Loved it! So glad Aden finally knows. I really like how you communicated the emotions and feelings so well and with very little dialogue. Update soon. Quote
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