BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 Naww, seriously so beautiful Can't wait for the next one Quote
matticus01 Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww both those chapters were just so beautiful, well written and Im so glad Aden and Belle are ok now! update soon Quote
leah1234 Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 aaw that was sooooooooooooo sweet!!!! amazing stuff!!! update soon xxxxx Quote
Deborah Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 (edited) Aww, that was so beautifully written again, made me cry! You are such a talented writer, & yet you seem to think your chapters are not always "quite what it should be." I am no expert but to me, everything you have written has just been excellent! Keep up the good work & I look forward to reading more Edited November 11, 2008 by Deborah Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 Something felt right about it to me lol it was great Very sweet Although i really hope Aden doesn't go to jail Great update Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 Oh no! His court case! I hope he makes it through it ok! I don't want him to go to jail... They've been through so much! Great update as always. I don't know what you thought that it wasn't, because it certainly was. You really can do no wrong [unless you break Adelle up!] More soon please! xoxo Quote
xknomex Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 *tear* That was written so beautifully. You are one talented writer! wow. I really really hope that Aden doesn't go to jail! I don't think I would cope! Please make it okay! Update soon xx Quote
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 You wrote that really well, fantastic update You manage to make the chapters seem so real, so emotional, top work Hope Aden doesnt go to jail, he cant miss out on baby Adelle Quote
matticus01 Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 As Belle ran her fingers slowly across Aden’s bare chest she couldn’t help but marvel at his ability to sleep at a time like this. This bit just took my breath away, it was amazing I loved that chapter, I was wondering when Aden's court case would be mentioned Update soon, Im hooked on this! Quote
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 That really was beautiful...gosh, I hope everything goes alright in the court case; Aden has to be there when the baby's born Can't wait Quote
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