xknomex Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 *wipes away tears* WOW just.... wow!!! Those chapters were AMAZING!!!! I was so worried all the way through!!! Thank God the baby cried and was okay [i hope] This fic cant end!!! Its too good, btw I think you should call the baby adelle Update soon xx Quote
Deborah Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 Awww that was just lovely! Zoie Bella Absolutely loved it once again Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 *wipes away tears* wow, that was unreal! really really well written The descripton init was so realistic, absolutely loved it Loved the name, very cute Fantastic update Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 I loved the name! It's so fitting and perfect! The whole chapter was perfect! I can't believe there's only one or two chapters left. I really cannot stop reading this fic. Everytime the chapter ends, I just want more. I've probably read each chapter about 3 times already just to get a fix of your writing But seriously, that was absolutely beautiful. I loved how you described both of their feelings at seeing their daughter and being with her. I just hope that everything stays perfect! xoxo Quote
xknomex Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 That name is beautiful!! The way you described how they were feeling and what they were doing. It was beautifully written! Update soon xxx Quote
rfran Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 Loving it so much the last chapter was so touching just wow. Can't beileve it's nearly over you writting is great. Quote
wrongturntaken Posted November 16, 2008 Report Posted November 16, 2008 That was so beautiful... loved the name! I get the feeling you might be using life experiences to write this fic as you are always so accurately descriptive it's so easy to imagine the scenes you write... I can't wait for the next chapter but i really don't want it to end... it's so good! Update soon! Quote
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 Oh gosh that was so beautiful! Love her name, it's a very Belle name Your writing is so detailed... I still can't believe this is going to end soon Can't wait Quote
matticus01 Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 awwwwww Zoie Bella Jefferies Am in love with that name such a lovely chapter, i dont want it to end! update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 17, 2008 Report Posted November 17, 2008 AWWWWW that was so adorable, you captured the moment perfectly Perfect ending aswell It has been an absolute pleasure reading this, its been fantastic all the way through Your writing is so good!! Thanks for writing it, hope you write more Quote
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