Jody Posted December 15, 2008 Report Posted December 15, 2008 Good chapter. Feel so sorry for all those kids. Update soon.
homeandawayforever23 Posted December 15, 2008 Report Posted December 15, 2008 Great chapters. Those poor children. Roman dressed up as santa. Please update soon.
Taniya_K Posted December 15, 2008 Report Posted December 15, 2008 Roman as Santa is funny! Those poor kids - I hope they get what they want or at least a bit of happiness for the time being! Cannot wait for more. xoxo
Adelle2008 Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Chapter 16 “Give me the remote Geoff!” Aden tackled Geoff stretching his arm out to reach the remote. “I want to watch 24!” Aden protested. “No, you watched that last night, I wanna watch Desperate Housewives!” Geoff winged “Come on, seriously that is a chicks show” he argued “I don’t care. It’s the only time I get to stare at hot chicks without getting in trouble with the misses” “Yeah and I watch it I’ll be in trouble with my misses! Now let’s watch 24, like real men are suppose to” “No…Aden, just get off me will you” Aden was on top of him still. Just at the moment Belle walked in. It looked like they were doing a lot more than crushing each other. “Please continue don’t mind me. I had no idea you guys liked to wrestle” Belle gave them a funny look and walked away. “Great now Belle thinks I’m gay...” Aden hissed. “Who cares…Hey now you’ll be able to watch desperate housewives with me” Aden finally grabbed the remote and hit him on the head for his stupid comment. Living in a share house with Geoff, Nicole and Belle was sometimes difficult for Aden. Belle was hardly a nuisance it was mainly Geoff and Nicole. Nicole throwing her tantrums in the mornings, Geoff complaining about watching his TV shows. “Thank god they’re gone” Aden sighed rubbing his eyes “Why do you want Belle to leave so desperately you sick of her already?” Nicole said implying that Aden was tired of being with Belle. How could he ever get sick of Belle? She was the only thing keeping him sane in this life. “No I am not sick of Belle! I want to look for an engagement ring and I can’t do it while Belle is around can I” “So why do you want me here?” “I need a girl’s opinion...” “Then you should have asked Geoff” she said sarcastically. Aden frowned. “Sorry only joking geez…you’re so serious about this kinda stuff” Nicole mocked him. “What kinda stuff.” Aden looked confused. “You know marriage, having babies…settling down….” she counted out her list by using her fingers. “Alright whatever just help me” he couldn’t care less about what Nicole thought. He just wanted to find the perfect ring so he could buy it. “So when are you planning on prosing?” Nicole shoved a piece of choc chip cookie in her mouth. Aden sat at the coffee table looking intensely at the jewellery catalogues. “I was thinking on New Years” he said as he was mesmerized by the ring brochure. “Mmmm how romantic…I wonder when Geoff will pop the question” Nicole smiled at Aden who wasn’t looking at her but still at the brochure. “Maybe one day Nicole….one day…..” Aden turned the page not removing his eyes from the page. “Hey guys” Belle walked opened the door and walked into the room. Aden hadn’t been expecting to see Belle for another 10 minutes or so. As soon as Aden called the word hey he flinched bumping the table as he tried to stand up. “Ahhh nothing” he said hiding the brochures with a weight watches magazine. “What are you two doing...?” Belle wondered over to the table to see a women’s diet magazine infront of him. “Oh we’re just looking at…” Aden glanced down at the table and read the title of the magazine. Shocked to see it was a women’s diet magazine he tried quickly to find a believable excuse. “Oh Nicole and I were just reading about diet plans…because yeah Nicole wants to go on a diet” Nicole then shoved another cookie in her mouth. “I do not!” she spoke with the cookie still inside her mouth “I see...” Belle said not believing their excuse for a second. “Well while you two plan a diet scheme for Nicole I’ll be upstairs” Belle leaned closer and kissed her boyfriend on the cheek. After Nicole and Aden heard Belle’s bedroom door close Nicole rolled her eyes and said “Wow…you really are a genius” . Sorry it's so short, Hope you guys like it.
LAURZY! Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 LMAO Loved it!!! such a great change of pace Geoff likes Desperate Housewives Cant wait for him to propose! Great update hun
matticus01 Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 hahahahahahahaha Geoff watching Desperate Housewives Aden and Geoff tackling each other Pure brilliance
amybabyy.x3 Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 great story soo far Belle and Aden are soo cute together 1 question but... if they want kids, they need to have sex and seeing that belle has HIV and to get pregnant she would obviously need to have unprotected sex with aden, doesnt that mean he might contract the disease?
xknomex Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 ahahahahaha Geoff and Aden at the beginning! Yay Aden's going to propose! hehe update soon xxx
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Top bit of Geoff and Aden comedy at the beginning.Loving it!
Taniya_K Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Hehe, loved that chapter. Esp the beginning! How funny! Awwwwww, Aden's going to propose! Cannot wait for more! xoxo
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