wrongturntaken Posted December 5, 2008 Report Posted December 5, 2008 WOW! I think this was your best chapter yet! They way Belle explained everything to Aden was written amazingly and you really made me feel for her! I'm hoping this Aden/Nicole sleeping together thing is just to get it out of the way so Aden can realise his true feelings for Belle? lol Fantastic yet again! Please update soon! Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 5, 2008 Report Posted December 5, 2008 Damn, now I really want to know exactly what David did to her. Poor Belle. I loved how she just spilled everything out to Aden. Brilliant. Aden and Nicole... uh... hmm... Interesting, I guess. And I agree with Laura too, very racy! Hope you update soon. Would love to read more! xoxo Quote
Lise Posted December 5, 2008 Report Posted December 5, 2008 I wonder what David actually did to Belle. Poor thing! Aden really does get around, doesn't he? Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote
Adelle2008 Posted December 5, 2008 Report Posted December 5, 2008 When does Aden and Belle get together!!! Good chapter by the way. Quote
HeavenForbid Posted December 6, 2008 Report Posted December 6, 2008 Great update! Awh, poor Belle. I hope she will be able too get help soon. Hehe and Aden and Nicole. Very racy indeed, hehe. Quote
Jen Posted December 6, 2008 Report Posted December 6, 2008 Ooh... Nicole and Aden . I hope Roman doesn't catch them. That would be an extremely awkward situation. And then Geoff! The story with Belle is really developing. I liked how she opened up to Aden, and then the other's overheard. I guess it saves her explaining it twice. But still, she's being a bit cagey. I have my suspicions about what might have happened, but I guess I'm going to have to wait for a while yet to find out if I'm right. Keep up the great work. Quote
Jody Posted December 6, 2008 Report Posted December 6, 2008 OMG! That was so horrible what David did to her. It's no wonder she can't cope and is doing all this stuff to herself. Good advice Belle gave to Aden. Please update soon. Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Posted December 6, 2008 That flashback was harrowing, no wonder she's not coping! Absolutely loved the ending, Belle seems to have already got Aden sussed Should be interesting when Nicole and Aden see each other lol Really looking forward to reading more..... Quote
Adelle2008 Posted December 6, 2008 Report Posted December 6, 2008 Poor Belle...no one deserves to be treated like that. This was a great chapter once again. But I want Aden and Belle to get together!!! Quote
Adelle_fan1000 Posted December 6, 2008 Report Posted December 6, 2008 Its a great story so far I was shocked with Aden and annie, and Aden and Nicole lol.. that surprised me and poor belle I wanna read more Quote
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