matticus01 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Posted December 2, 2008 that was amazing Red Ranger, just pure brilliance Now if this had happened on the show, I think it would have been much better than him just getting 100 hours community service This just has me in an awe Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 2, 2008 Report Posted December 2, 2008 Loved it Glad Aden's ok, and he's finally realised he needs help!! Great update as per ... Quote
xknomex Posted December 2, 2008 Report Posted December 2, 2008 wow those last few chapters were amazing!! I'm glad Aden has seen that he needs to get help. I'm soo happy that he did well in his HSC and that his dad was proud Update soon i am loving this fic! xx Quote
rfran Posted December 2, 2008 Report Posted December 2, 2008 Fantastic think your way of dealing with this is really great liked that Aden is getting help and understand that after what has happened the stigma attached to asking has gone in his mind. Pleased he wants to move on, it's really hard to get to that place in your head and very easy for circumstances to turn you back not forward. Quote
Inactive User Posted December 3, 2008 Report Posted December 3, 2008 Good work, mate. I liked it Update soon and can't wait to read more. Quote
wrongturntaken Posted December 3, 2008 Report Posted December 3, 2008 I loved the talk between Larry and Aden! ...and that conversation between Aden and Rachel was perfect! I'm glad that Aden knows he needs help... i loved what you said about Rachel not being able to stand being next to someone in pain and not being able to help them... and I hadn't even thought about the possibility of him 'silencing' her if he had killed his dad either, but it's completely logical. That last last about Aden not wanting to be the kind of person that belongs in prison was amazing too! I love this fic! Can't wait for more! Quote
whispered_envy Posted December 3, 2008 Report Posted December 3, 2008 Aww, that was wonderful! I loved it, every single bit of it. I like this Aden...if only he went to prison on the show, then they could have hired you to write his lines! Heartfelt and fantastic! Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 “Aden!I heard a rumour you were dead.” “You did?” “Yeah but mainly because I started it.I wanted to know how people would react.” That bit cracked me up!! Geoff and Nicole they are so sweet We all knew Belle still loved him Glad Aden seems to be ok now! Loved it!!! Quote
rfran Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 Loved this Aden needing to work out where to go now and also Geoff and Nicole working out one of the most important lessons in life, that it doesn't matter how much you love some one, that is not enough, there is so much more that has to be right and if it's wrong how ever hard you try it will only frustrate you or stop you being yourself. Thanks for writing this it is so good to have a fic which is different in tone from many of the others it's good to have a change. Quote
Louise_2983 Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 Aww I'm glad you didn't get rid of Belle all together. Given it's you though I'm not expecting a happy Adelle ending but I can still hope. Quote
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