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brilliant Red Ranger :)

I knew that you weren't going to give Aden and Belle a happy ending. I would seriously eat my own arm if you did lol :D

Those chapter were brilliant and so well written so points up for that, and the fact that I actually enjoy reading this :)

update soon

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Sorry I haven’t posted here in a while. I can only mirror the previous comments in regards to the counselling session, although I hope you don’t do what they did on the show and suddenly decide that he’s cured after a total of two hours. You would expect something like this to go on for months.

I can sense the finishing line. I’m hoping for some major event, near cataclysmic to occur. On the other hand it could just be an anticlimax.

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I dont think it was a mistake that you made it longer than you first planned, the counselling sessions have been really enlightning and i think in the long run will help round things up and tie any loose ends. Does that make sense?? i know waht i mean anyway lol

and its a good thing :lol:

That was probably my fave chapter , the way you had Aden questioning himself and almost coming to some sort of realisation about how what he did affected people was so powerful in quite a calm way <_< . Which i think in the long run would help him solve any unresolved issues he has.

Really cant wait for the epilogue

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