Red Ranger 1 Posted December 17, 2008 Report Posted December 17, 2008 Oh dear...Want to see their reactions when they find out what's happened. Quote
whispered_envy Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Posted December 18, 2008 Aww, this fic is too sad. Wonder how Roman's going to deal with the guilt of being annoyed at his daughter for being late. I like how it's been written, though. Keep it going. Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 wow this is really good, but so sad! Really well written Great update Quote
xknomex Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 that was soo sad poor Nic. That was written so well. Update soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Oh, that was really good.I like how you've made what's happened to Nicole something random and arbitrary. Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Just read the last two chapters. I love how you've kept them all in character so perfectly that I can imagine it happening on the screen. Poor Nic. That last line of the last chapter was brilliant. Roman's going to feel so horrible for being annoyed at her, and I can imagine both Geoff and Aden feeling guilty too. Cannot wait for more. xoxo Quote
Inactive User Posted December 18, 2008 Report Posted December 18, 2008 Great chapter. Poor Nicole. So sad Please keep on writing, Update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 20, 2008 Report Posted December 20, 2008 wow! that was so realistic, Aden's reaction was great Brill update once again Hope you have a great X-Mas Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 20, 2008 Report Posted December 20, 2008 Wow, that was a really powerful chapter.Well done. Quote
SAM27# Posted December 20, 2008 Report Posted December 20, 2008 OMG this is so sad!! I am about to bawl after reading that last chapter!!! Quote
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