Lise Posted December 21, 2008 Report Posted December 21, 2008 The last two chapters were great! You almost made me cry. Merry Christmas! Quote
Inactive User Posted December 21, 2008 Report Posted December 21, 2008 Waaaaaaaaaaa :( So sad and powerful. Merry Christmas Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 Oh, good update.You're writing everyone's reactions really well. Quote
SAM27# Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 This is really good!!! Poor Aden having to do the phone calls, and poor Roman and Geoff...and Charlie....really I feel sorry everyone!!! I am loving how you are writing this..can't wait for more!! Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 awww, that was so emotional. I loved how you wrote Geoff's thoughts and feelings Brill update as usual, very well written Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 28, 2008 Report Posted December 28, 2008 Gosh, that was so sad. So good, but so sad. I loved that bit where Aden had to call everyone, and at the end when he hoped that maybe Morag could make it all better. That almost broke my heart. The ending was superb. Cannot wait for more. Quote
Lise Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 That was good but very sad, too. Poor Aden having to ring everyone. That's got to be an awful job. I loved how you wrote Roman's reaction. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 I don't know what you were worrying about, I thought that was very good.You're capturing everyone's reactions very well. Quote
Lise Posted January 4, 2009 Report Posted January 4, 2009 That was amazing. You had absolutely nothing to worry about. Morag cried! I love Geoff's thoughts. You do an amazing job with that. Quote
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