Lesley Bee Posted March 29, 2009 Report Posted March 29, 2009 Ive just read this right from the beginning and im loving it Please update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted May 5, 2009 Author Report Posted May 5, 2009 This is getting really good. Update soon Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted May 20, 2009 Report Posted May 20, 2009 Good chapters! Can't wait to read an update soon! Quote
jdoddy Posted May 20, 2009 Report Posted May 20, 2009 Because I have not read this fiction for a while I have to admit I got lost in the past couple of chapters, - when in doubt, re-read (which I promptly did) and I can happily say I have managed to pick up the thread of your storytelling again - can't wait for the next installment in this story, especially since they are busy delving into Roman's past on the television.. it's good to get another angle! Well Done. and keep it up! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted June 5, 2009 Report Posted June 5, 2009 Brilliant! I love the outburst in the Diner and can't wait till Roman and Liz meet (is Liz Ella by the way?) and that Roman finds out he have a son! Can't wait to see where this leads. Looking forward to an update soon! Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 (edited) Hey everyone.... Can I ask you to please please comment and let me know what you think... Thanks!!! Edited June 13, 2009 by Marigoldly Quote
jdoddy Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 I was rather confused by the end of the fic and you had a G/N engagement but nothing seemed to come of it - after they returned home we only saw them in fleeting appearances Quote
Anaya Posted October 8, 2009 Report Posted October 8, 2009 Seeing as I'm banned from a certain place where I liked to hang out, I thought I'd find another place to camp out in. It's a Roman fic! A Roman fic! Yay... a Roman one! Woop! Woop! Now that I've got that out of the way. *composes self* I shall review it properly. I like your writing style and I found that it easily held my attention from the off. Even though your style isn't overly descriptive when writing about the emotions, surroundings and interactions between the characters, it's not just full of dialogue only. You have a good balance & it makes the style very individual to you. I loved that we got to see a deeper, more emotional side to Roman in this, something the show never did, especially when it came to love/romance. You wrote him spot on, still keeping that strong, silent personality we're so used to, but managing to convey his inner feelings at the same time. The highlight for me in this fic was the Miles/Roman friendship, it was spot on, and felt very natural. I loved the comedy that it brought with it & the way their almost opposite personalities complimented each other. The letter, the instant effect it had on Roman, the losing it & finding it and changing hands, the way everything was revealed yet the letter was never read was perfectly written (are we ever going to find out what was in it?? ). Also that diner scene with everyone eavesdropping was funny with them all jumping to the wrong conclusions and then finally Roman's outburst. Especially because it involved someone as secretive as Roman, who likes to keep everything to himself. Geoff/Nicole parts were cute too. As were the Roman/Ella parts. I liked Ella from what little we got to know about her. I expected some more interaction & banter between them before we got to the conclusion. I did find the ending very quick & abrupt and I would have liked to read a few more chapters before we got there. But lucky for me I had A SB Wedding complete and ready for me to read next. So in the end I was glad that you left things out and we got to find out more from reading on. Good stuff. Well written & very interesting to read. Sorry for the loooooooooong rant... something you'll have to get used to with me. Quote
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