Inactive User Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 Aww so sad. Belle should let Amanda explain more to her instead of kicking her out of her life ever Update soon. Can't wait to see what would happen next for Aden and Belle Quote
xknomex Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 that was such a sad chapter Poor Adelle, its not fair! really great update!! xxx Quote
xknomex Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 that was such a sad chapter Poor Adelle, its not fair! really great update!! xxx Quote
MissOlivia22 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 I haven't commented on this yet! How did that happen.... XD Wow what an interesting story. I could just imagine Aden doing that to the house and I'm kind of glad Belle is having the feeling she is. Update soon! Quote
Louise_2983 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 This is amazingly well written, I can almost literally feel their pain as I'm reading it. I'm sat here wishing for Aden's Mum to have cheated too so they're not actually siblings but given this is your fic I'm not holding out much hope Quote
LAURZY! Posted February 1, 2009 Author Report Posted February 1, 2009 ^ I'm with Louise Brill update once again!! You wrote everyone's reactions so well The ending was pretty sad too Looking forward to reading more Quote
MissOlivia22 Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 (edited) Hehe, I've already commented, but I just love the way everyone knows there is no way you will be nice to Aden and Belle because you don't like them XD I was even surprised you were even writing fanfiction about them until I saw the word 'torture' in the advertising thread XD Update soon! Edited February 1, 2009 by MissOlivia22 Quote
Zetti Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 Aden's thoughts at the end made my heart break, so upsetting but you wrote it really well so that is a good thing Quote
Inactive User Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 Great chapter. Sad and touching, well-written. Let's hope Aden and Belle will get through this together and get to know each other as brother and sister. Update soon Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 1, 2009 Report Posted February 1, 2009 Wow, i seriously loved that chapter! especially the last scene, it was so sad that they didn't know how they felt or what was right. You wrote the way they were feeling so well!!! Update soon! Quote
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