xknomex Posted February 6, 2009 Report Posted February 6, 2009 ooo this is getting intriguing, cant wait to see how thats going to turn out. brilliant update once again xx Quote
LAURZY! Posted February 6, 2009 Author Report Posted February 6, 2009 Oh now that will be interesting!! lol cant wait to see/read what they say to each other. Another brill update, your really writing all the characters so well Looking forward to more Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 6, 2009 Report Posted February 6, 2009 Great chapter! It's good that Aden talked to Amanda and i love how he was worried about what his father had done. I liked the ending greeting between Aden and Belle. Update soon! Quote
silly_vanessa Posted February 6, 2009 Report Posted February 6, 2009 i dont think i can watch adelle scenes in the same way now, but i sure as hell will try Quote
Inactive User Posted February 6, 2009 Report Posted February 6, 2009 Great chapter. Update soon Looking forwards to next chapter Quote
karter Posted February 7, 2009 Report Posted February 7, 2009 (edited) Ahh Red Ranger, living the dream, Adelle gone forever. Nice story, well written, interesting plot, excellent. Edited February 7, 2009 by karter Quote
Inactive User Posted February 8, 2009 Report Posted February 8, 2009 Great chapter. I feel for Aden and Belle They seemed to be struggling to accept each other as half siblings. But hopefully they will need each other in their lives as brother and sister. Update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Posted February 8, 2009 That was so good! I love how you brought Geoff and Nicole into it and showed Geoff's anxiousness about getting too close to her! I really feel for them both, really liked Belle's thoughts about what she was wearing. Looking forward to seeing how you progress their brother/sister relationship Cant wait for more Quote
xknomex Posted February 8, 2009 Report Posted February 8, 2009 “You’re beautiful.” - that made me cry :( Poor poor Aden and Belle. This is such a good fic!!! (even though you split up adelle ) I'm loving it. cant wait till the next update xx Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 8, 2009 Report Posted February 8, 2009 AW! You're writing this so perfectly! I love how you're making everyone act, it seems really realistic! Update soon! Quote
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