adellejefferiesxox Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Wow, I'm so relieved you guys like it! Thanks heaps. Thumbs up.
Adelle_fan1000 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Ahh it was good.. would love to read more
adellejefferiesxox Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Chapter one continued: Small chapter sorry, been at work. Hope you all like it.... Her brown eyes stared at him, glistening with love and happiness. I never felt this way about anyone before Aden; you’re so amazing she smiled whispering to him as she trailed her hand ever so gently down his face. You’re so beautiful Aden replied back as he moved in slowly unsure of whether or not he should kiss her, but all he wanted to do was kiss her. Belle opened her moisten lips, Aden she whispered as she closed her eyes ‘Don’t say a word’ was his finally reply before giving into his long awaited temptation. “Aden...” a voice called “Aden” the voice grew louder “Aden!” Aden’s eyes opened quickly brushing his hair back “Dad why did you have to wake me” he asked breathing intensely, he was very confused about his dream, why was he dreaming of her, it’s not like he cared about Belle. “It’s time to get up, you have school today. Hurry up you’ll be late” Aden pushed the covers aside hoping out of bed wearing only his jeans. “Were you dreaming, son?” Larry asked as he hung a freshly ironed pair of black pants “Yeah” Aden said quietly, looking at his watch. “Aden, do you mind working at the diner tonight? I have to take Nicole into the city” Aden froze thinking back to his dream earlier that day, was Belle going to be working there? Oh who cares why am I so nervous about seeing her anyway? He asked himself. “Aden” Roman waved his hand in front of face trying to gain his attention “Oh yeah, no problem” he briefly gave his head a small shake trying to wake himself up. Feeling smug again Aden ignored his previous feelings of the day and put on a professional act that was until Angelo arrived at the diner. What was the problem anyway, why did Aden cringe at the sight of Angelo. “Hey gorgeous” Aden heard Angelo’s voice outside of the kitchen, that was his motto. “Hi yeah I would love to go see a movie on Saturday” Belle said whilst giggling. What a loser Aden said to himself, ‘What was that?” Irene sprung into the kitchen out of nowhere, Eying her he shrugged off the comment by saying “Ah nothing”. “Ouch” Belle said as Aden passed by purposely brushing shoulders with her. “Sorry” Aden mumbled, “It’s okay, an accident” Belle rolled her eyes. “Actually” Aden faced her trying hard not to snap at her “That wasn’t an accident, I did that on purpose” Now he’s cheeky side was about to come out as Aden saw Belle getting more irritated by the second “How else am I suppose to get a pretty girl like yourself to talk to me?” Aden smirked “Yeah you’re right...not many girls would wanna talk to a self-centred person like yourself” Aden loved fighting with Belle, he didn’t know why but he just loved stirring Belle up. “So how about it Belle, would you like to go out with an incredibly handsome, smart, and exceptionally talented kisser...” Belle looked horrified. “See I don’t think you trust yourself with me” Aden continued to fire her up “You’re right I might vomit” Aden laughed “Well, I know one thing’s for sure. You definitely think I know what’s right. And I think you and me are the right decision” Belle rolled her eyes shaking her head. “Just grow up, I know that’s not a very familiar concept with you but I think it’s better late than never to starting learning” Belle left the kitchen carrying two plates of toasted sandwiches ‘Why did I say that, I’m such an idiot’ Aden hit the bench furiously. Leave a message xx.
bailey4 Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 yeyah loving it!! I love their little banter. Jealous Aden = Hot!!
LAURZY! Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Love the banter Awww he dreamed about her Great update
Zetti Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 He dreamed about her I love the banter between them
Symphony Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 Interesting - I like where you're taking this, particularly that Irene wants Belle to go out with Angelo so that's why she's giving it a shot; nice to see Belle doing something unselfish for a change In the first chapter, I noticed that you'd used a few lines from the show [i love you too babe, etc] - and just a personal preference always prefer to see author's coming up with their own backlash banter, but that's just a personal thing nice job - look forward to an update!
saraz Posted January 29, 2009 Report Posted January 29, 2009 loved the update belle with give into aden's charm soon hopefully please update soon
adellejefferiesxox Posted January 30, 2009 Report Posted January 30, 2009 In the first chapter, I noticed that you'd used a few lines from the show [i love you too babe, etc] - and just a personal preference always prefer to see author's coming up with their own backlash banter, but that's just a personal thing Nah I totally agree, it's just some readers like reading the well-known comments by Aden. Next time hopefully I'll be adding my own personal touch. Thank you to everybody once again, your comments motivate me to write more. lol, please keep reading this fic. *Smilie face*
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