Broken (by Lise) - comments

[Lise]

  wrongturntaken said:

I hope you write more, you're really good!

I actually wrote some out when I was on holiday maybe when I get home I should type them out?!?!

I never expected this to make people cry, more laugh than anything else.

I'm still shocked that people actually like it.

Oh, and thank you to each and every one of you that took the time to comment. You really have made my day!

Edited January 29, 2009 by Lise

[Laura]

Aw, this is beautiful and sad. I love the poem and how you put it in there

[Miranda]

Great fic, the poor Martha. I loved the way you quoted that poem. It reminds me of that other well known poem about death, the one they read out in Four Weddings and a Funeral. Something about 'stop all the clocks, shut out the sun' or something.

[KaiyaBlake]

So sad!

Of course you should type out more

Great great great writing, I loved it

Edited January 31, 2009 by KaiyaBlake

[suzannelgnz]

I can't believe I hadn't read this earlier Lise, because it's soooo beautiful

You should write other stories/one shots too .

[Eli]

Wow, that's really good, especially considering it's the first thing you've written! It's really nicely written, just the right amount of sad for a fic like that

I really hope you decide to write more fics, because this is good

[Lise]

Thank you! The comments rock!

I have another story which is in the midst of maybe having the final touches put to it.

[homeandawayforever23]

That was great! Very well written. I really like how you incorporated the poem into it.

[~Zoe~]

That was very good, very sad & emotional I like how you've added the poem in there.

[JM_stuchers]

I have always loved that poem, and you used it perfectly.