Inactive User Posted March 10, 2009 Report Posted March 10, 2009 Wow loved it! Update soon I hated it when Tam left two years ago. She was a great character and hopefully she may return one day Quote
Zetti Posted March 10, 2009 Report Posted March 10, 2009 The last scene made me smile. I love Nicole's reaction to Tam and Geoff being at a complete loss for words I love the way that Geoff and Tam had the scene at the beginning, really cute. Quote
Slade Posted March 10, 2009 Report Posted March 10, 2009 Thoroughly enjoying this. Even more than some of your other fan fics. The whole scene between Nicole and Tam brought a smile to my face. I think you’ve got both of them down to a tee. I could just picture them in that scenario as well. Geoff as per usual couldn’t get a word in edgeways. The balance of adolescents seems just right. “Do you think Nicole will think like that?”Melody asked. “Well, look on the bright side.At least it’ll distract her from you being back.” Looking forward to the run-in with Aden and Belle. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 11, 2009 Report Posted March 11, 2009 Awesome! I am glad it's another fanfiction from you RR1 Update soon please Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted March 11, 2009 Report Posted March 11, 2009 Well Aden can't be completely changed... then he wouldn't have any bad boy in him Tam's so much like Nicole, it's funny! Loved that chapter. Update sooooon? Quote
Slade Posted March 12, 2009 Report Posted March 12, 2009 Keep it up! Why do I get the distinct impression that that whole incident re Tam/Aden still bothers you? So at least one person in Summer Bay doesn’t think that the sun shines out of his backside. Let’s hope she stirs things up some more. Still expecting her to warn Belle about Aden at some point. And hopefully more scenes in school like we had before. Also like to see how she gets on with Ruby and Melody. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 12, 2009 Report Posted March 12, 2009 Why do I get the distinct impression that that whole incident re Tam/Aden still bothers you? So at least one person in Summer Bay doesn’t think that the sun shines out of his backside. Believe it or not, whatever my personal feelings on the subject, I was originally going to have Aden apologise to Tam and them put it behind them.Then I thought "Nah, Aden wouldn't apologise, he'd get embarrassed and put his foot in it." Quote
jdoddy Posted March 12, 2009 Report Posted March 12, 2009 funny stuff! - right there at the end Quote
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