amz89 Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 thats okay oh I wasnt sure makes sense now soz bout that..
stephyrose4 Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 I'm sorry I haven't commented in ages! I don't really have an excuse? Oops . God I love Jack. And god I hate Alex! I don't care if Alex is doing nothing wrong, well actually he is. He's got Martha, and Jack doesn't! *pushes Alex of a cliff* There we go. Jack can have Martha now . “I’m not your past babe. I’m your future”, he smirked smartly. Hehe, so funny! That was my favorite line. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Pengzilla Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 *Boo's Pengzilla, then runs before she gets me* ! I have a gun, remember. Running is pointless. “I would’ve thought you’d be off with some half-witted tramp by now” “I was waiting for you”, he began to chug his next beer down. ... “Where’s your girlfriend?”, he spoke up. Not bothering to start a conflict over the liquid he was now cleaning up off himself. ... “So are we going to talk about it or what?”, Martha’s shrill voice pierced through his ears on top of the music. “I think we’ve pretty much covered it. Alex is a woman, let’s move on” Lol! Loved those bits. Gotta love the he/she humour. I really feel sorry for Jack. Bless him.
lino Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Good update. Can't wait for Tashas wedding, and what will happen with Martha and Jack there.
Barbara Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 I thought I was mean when I talked about shooting you. At least, I'm not loading my gun yet. I would have to buy one first and learn how to aim. Amateur! I wonder what will happen between Jack and Alex. What if they fall in love!? Now that would be a GREAT twist! And it would serve Martha right for bringing him back to the bay (.com). *ba da bum bum ching!* :cool: *bows at applause* You know what? As I'm an amateur, I'll let you take care of things. Martha and Jack having their drink was hilarious! They were already getting drunk back then. Lol Martha and Jack are so funny! And they still love each other. “At least I didn’t cheat on you. You ass”, she yelled out after him. Jack stopped. Did she really just accuse him of that? “You’re calling me a cheater?” “You are” “That’s funny. I distinctly remember you breaking up with me first”, he pretended to think about it. “Physically, we were broken up, you’re right. But emotionally, I was no where near ready to end our relationship”, tears began to form in the corner of her eyes. ‘Damn alcohol’, she cursed mentally. She didn’t want to have to wipe away any tears tonight. “I’m not even going to get into this again. You know I’m sorry. I don’t know what else you expect from me” That part was so sad! That reminds me of Ross and Rachel in Friends when they 'were on a break'. No preview? More please.
dee83 Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Great So far hope Martha dumps Alex and gets back with Jack cause their still in love with each other I think Tash and Robbies wedding would be a perfect time for them to get back together Update Soon
KaiyaBlake Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 *Boo's Pengzilla, then runs before she gets me* ! I have a gun, remember. Running is pointless. *Looks ashamed and surrenders* No preview? Ahh woops Next Chapter: Martha and Jack get tricked into talking
Barbara Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 No preview? Ahh woops Next Chapter: Martha and Jack get tricked into talking Thank you! Sounds really interesting. Looking forward to it.
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 15, 2009 Report Posted May 15, 2009 I loved that chapter I loved all the JnM banter. There are not enough JnM fics around now, damn it! Update soon, or Bob (my killer bull-ant) may come to visit. JOKES Lol Or not...
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