Barbara Posted June 23, 2009 Report Posted June 23, 2009 Anyway, Peng… if things don’t end up panning out for good old JnM in this fic, I will be sure to direct him your way! But then again, there's Barbara. Who is probably a safer choice... BARBARA!? Seriously? She's rubbish. She has nothing to do with Penguins or Godzilla in her name. Excuse me! Me rubbish? *glares* Who wants a huge and ugly monster in their name anyway? --- It wasn't boring and I love long chapters. I prefer long chapters with happy JM though. The memory was funny. Tony was probably right when he decided to make up some rules. “Okay… so who’s up for trading places?” Me, me, me! Martha sniffled. “Don’t worry, as soon as this wedding’s over… I’m gone”, she reassured him. What? She's leaving? She can't leave. Not without Jack anyway. I'm sure that deep down, Jack doesn't want her to go and she doesn't want to leave. “No. She’s still Martha, the girl I once caught eating a whole packet of sparkles. I guess she presumed because they looked so great… you know”, he laughed, presuming that Robbie would catch on. “Ugh”, Robbie gagged, taking a beer of Jack before they both left the house. “Mm hmm and I was only 5 at the time so you can imagine what I thought… I didn’t let her near any of my toys for over a week until I was sure. I mean, she ate little specks of plastic, who knew what was next. I wasn’t risking it”, Jack continued with his story, getting caught up in all the little memories that were running back to him. I don't know about you but personally, I would pick something else to eat. ‘You seemed to have the right idea when you did this 2 years ago. I’m sorry I wasn’t as keen to let go’ I really don't like that part. I'm looking forward to the wedding. Tasha is going to kill them if they ruin her wedding because of their bickering. More please.
amz89 Posted June 24, 2009 Report Posted June 24, 2009 Poor Jack.. martha give him a chance. Cant wait for next chapter more soon please.
Nourtz Posted June 24, 2009 Report Posted June 24, 2009 That was soooo good!! the two are really Funny, but i'm starting to feel sorry for Jack now, the poor guy can't do anything right!! the last bit was quite sad, Jacks dropped off her stuff hopefully they'll work it out at the wedding and not be fighting the whole time! Great Chapter please update again really soon i'm dying to know more!!
Pengzilla Posted June 25, 2009 Report Posted June 25, 2009 That was realllly good! I thought there were two chapters. Don't know why.. I just did. I prepared myself for two. I'm gutted now. But ! I loved it! I love all this heartbreak stuff (as long as the hearts get mended in the end! ) Ooh, the note at the end! Aww! That's so sad! (And great ) Very funny too. I had a smile on my face all the way through. Brill stuff. Update soon!
KaiyaBlake Posted June 26, 2009 Report Posted June 26, 2009 Aw I'm so glad you guys liked it :D Thanks for your comments guys! P.s. Now you have to update Peng
Zetti Posted June 26, 2009 Report Posted June 26, 2009 Aww This makes me almost happy that I havent updated yet a nice heartbreak chapter means you cant kill me Anyways Dont like sad JM Please update soon!
Nourtz Posted July 1, 2009 Report Posted July 1, 2009 please update this story i'm dying for more!!!! the Wedding sounds really exciting!! please Kaiyablake
Zetti Posted July 2, 2009 Report Posted July 2, 2009 ^^ Yes I'm waiting for your update too I did update now its your turn
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