smokinace Posted August 12, 2009 Report Posted August 12, 2009 CHAPTER 23 Toby walked in and slammed the door. "Is it true?" Toby yelled "What?" Nicole asked looking up at him while sitting on the couch "That you're not pregnant" Nicole sighed "Who told you, did Ruby" "No" Toby yelled "Then wh..." "It was Indigo wasn''t it" she said "So what if it was" Toby yelled "I knew it, that girl has had a thing for you since day one" Nicole said "Oh, and for the record Hanna and i were talking about you, she was saying that you were a nice girl. That's what we were talking about i wasn't flirting with her" he yelled as he started to pack his bags. "Tell me, were you only with me because i was pregnant?" Nicole asked "No Nicole i wasn't" He stopped packing for a minute "Ilove you Nicole. That's why this hurts so much" He closed his bag and walked down stairs. "Where are you going" she asked "To stay with mum" he said "You said you couldn't live with your mum" "No i said i couldn't live with my dad" He stopped at the door "And another thing that hurts is you haven't asked me to stay" He yelled and slammed the door as he walked out CHAPTER 24 UP SOON
EmmaJane123 Posted August 12, 2009 Report Posted August 12, 2009 Oh Noo Poor Nic and Toby Is Nicole not pregant then?? Please Update! Xxxxxx
rocknroll Posted August 12, 2009 Report Posted August 12, 2009 ohh.. that was a good twist update soon xx
jdoddy Posted August 12, 2009 Report Posted August 12, 2009 I really enjoy your short chapters and the style in which you write - its all good.
smokinace Posted August 14, 2009 Report Posted August 14, 2009 CHAPTER 24 Nicole stopped outside Marianne's door and took a deep breath and knocked. Hanna opened it wearing just a shirt. "What are you doing here?" Nicole asked "Toby called, said he could use a friend. He told me everything" Hanna said "You live in the streets how can he call you?" Nicole asked "Toby and i used to break into alot of houses and steal things. So i have a mobile phone". "Can i talk to Toby?" Nicole asked angrily "No, he has made it clear he doesn't wanna see you" Hanna told her Nicole held out an envelope with a letter inside. "Can you give him this?" Nicole asked Hanna paused for a bit. "Alright" she said and took it and shut the door "Who was that?" Toby asked "Nicole, i told her you don't want to see her" Hanna said "Thanks" he replied "She asked me to give you this though" she said giving him the letter He opened it and read it Tobs i'm sorry and i love you. Please come home. Nicole CHAPTER 25 UP SOON
rocknroll Posted August 14, 2009 Report Posted August 14, 2009 good update! does he come home i wonder?? xx
smokinace Posted August 19, 2009 Report Posted August 19, 2009 CHAPTER 25 Toby sat on the front step "Hi" Nicole said walking towards him "Can we talk?" she asked "Sure" he anwered "I'm really sorry, it was a selfish thing to do" she told him "I know" he said standing up "Did you get my letter?" she asked "I threw it away" "Why?" "Because when you say sorry in a letter it's just words" he told her "Well i am sor" She started to say but he put his finger on her lip "Ssssssssshhhhhhhhh" he said "You're right it was selfish. But i'm sure you thought you had good reasons. But it's not ok and i do have to have time to trust you again. But i do forgive" he said and put his forehead against hers. "Where does this leave us?" she asked "I don't know but lets just take things slow from now on" he said. CHAPTER 26 UP SOON
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Posted September 11, 2009 Left this for a bit until we were further along at UK pace.Nicole not being pregnant was an interesting twist if a bit left field and I like the relationships between the characters.
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