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Learning To Breathe


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That chapter wasn't boring. It was great. We got to know more about Martha's past.

Will she ever date a guy who doesn't turn out to be a criminal or a cheater? I'm not talking about Jack of course. He's the exception. :P

Jack may need her help to be happy again but she needs his help too. Hopefully Jack will get her to contact Alf and Ric again. I doubt they would think she is responsible of what happened to Ric. David was the one who used the gun.

Hi, I’m Madeline the scarf. Take me back to the fabulous Martha please! She’ll be at Farlow Bridge at 2.30pm.

Madeline the scarf is so funny! :lol:

Jack smiled, “Well, to be honest I wasn’t going to. But then Madeline began to cry and scream and I just couldn’t be doing with it.” He told her, passing the scarf over to Martha.

But she is a big baby! :P

“I think I should be able to keep up.” Jack said.

I think this would be the Twilight rip-off. :P

More please.

PS: Good luck with the exams and revisions. :D

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Date night!? :o:wub:

I loved that chapter, poor Martha though! :( hopefully Jack can finally convince her to talk to Alf and Ric again!

Goodluck with all your exams and everything! :D

Loved it. Can't wait for more :)

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that was great... i love Martha and Jack... the bunjee jumping absolutely funny!!!

poor martha i feel sorry for her but she is going to help Jack and he'll help her too... they are still very much married!!!!

good luck with your exams... i know what your going through its a very stressful time - i have 3 exams!!!

although please update again soon as i'm dying to know about date night!!!!! :P

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Pengzilla please update i really want to know what happens with Martha and Jack !!!

how are you going with your Exams???? hope you are doing well!!

can't wait for an update :P

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I'm not doing well, actually. :/ But I have to keep trying. My exams are over in a weeks time, so I'll update then. I can't update until then though. Sorry.

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Apparently, I'm rubbish so I don't know if this will mean much to you. <_<:P But I still wanted to wish you good luck for your exams. You can do it. You just have to stay strong for one more week and you'll be able to enjoy a well deserved holiday. :D

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hey Pengzilla

i'm sure your doing fine on your exams and keep trying!!!

thats cool about updating!! i just can't wait thats all!! :P

but Good Luck on the rest of them (if you have anymore) :)

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Ok PRETTY PLEASE will you update i am officially wanting more of this brilliant story

please Pengzilla this is one of the best i've read in a long long time!! :P

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