-Kevin- Posted April 28, 2009 Report Posted April 28, 2009 Thank you everybody for all your comments. Hope you like this chapter Chapter 4 "We're here " Marc announced as he looked around to see everybody asleep. He grinned and began beeping the horn which woke everyone up pretty quickly "Finally " Belle moaned as she sat up from her cramped position in the passenger seat Marc glanced at Belle quickly before she turned around and smiled to everybody that were squashed into the back of the car. "Comfortable guys" Belle laughed "Yeah totally " Nicole replied as she lay comfortably in Geoff's arms "Which is more than I can say for some " Nicole joked as everybody laughed at Tina who was on the floor between the passenger seat and the door Belle opened the door and stepped out of the car to the insanely hot day. "Let me out " Tina yelled "Chill out im coming " Belle answered as she opened the door and let Tina out Tina stepped out of the car with the same grumpy expression that was plastered on her face ever since she overheard Nicole telling Geoff that they were having a baby. "Geeze looks like you had a rough night " Belle commented "I'm fine " Tina grunted "If you say so " Belle replied sarcastically Nicole and Geoff then stepped out of the car hand in hand both with huge grins on their face. "Whats with the goofy heads " Belle asked with a smirk "OK we're having a baby " Nicole gleefully announced "No way " Belle couldn't believe it "I only found out the other day " Nicole informed them "Congratulations " March shook both their hands Tina was evidently not happy about this as she began walking away "I'll just grab your bag " Marc asserted to Belle He smiled at her and she gave a slight smile in return "So this is our home for the next 2 weeks " Geoff looked up at their holiday home which was situated amongst a large collection of houses. "We are gona have so much fun " Nicole enthused "I've never been to a holiday village before " Marc added "OK guys I'll check us in " Tina declared as she began walking off "I'll go with her " Belle decided "No , you wait here with Nic and Marc and I'll go " Geoff interjected Geoff ran after Tina who had just turned a corner and disappeared from sight "So Nic , you sure kept that one quiet didn't you " Belle squealed "Aww yeah the only other person who knows is Roman " she breathed Nicole pulled Belle aside and they began to gossip "And dont think I haven't noticed the awkwardness between yourself and Marc " Nicole teased "Are you serious " Belle tried to play it down "Come on Belle , its me you're talking to " Nicole begged "OK we kinda kissed last night " she whispered "You so did not " Nicole was so excited "It was a stupid mistake though " Belle concluded "hmm yeah whatever you say " Nicole cheekily grinned at her as she turned round to check Marc out "Come on Belle he is so hot " Nicole carried on Belle then turned to look as well "Yeah he is pretty hot " she agreed and both girls giggled Marc looked at them and began to approach them "Oh my God hes coming over here " Belle gushed "Quick change the subject " she rushed ".. she so did not . Where did you see her " Nicole changed the subject quickly "who saw who where " Marc interrupted "Oh just someone we know from back home " Nicole lied " What's taking Geoff and Tina so long anyway" Belle chipped in "Look I can't see you anymore " Geoff sternly informed Tina "So princess says shes got a bun in the oven and you dont want me anymore" Tina felt cheated "I never wanted you in the first place , it was just a fling " he insisted coldly "Geoff what we had was special " she tried to win him round "I'm with Nicole now and im staying with her and your gona keep your mouth shut you understand me " Geoff warned her "What are you gona shut me up " Tina growled as she went up to his face "If you tell Nicole about what we did , you'll be sorry " he grabbed her arm "Let go of me " she pulled herself from his grasp "me and Nic are having this baby and you can't stop us " Geoff rubbed it in her face "yeah well dont you worry because looks like your little baby will have a little brother or sister " she responded "You what " Geoff frowned "Yeah Nicole's not the only one carrying a Campbell baby " she boasted "Wheres Tina " Nicole asked when Geoff returned alone "What's up with you " Nicole probed as Geoff looked like he had seen a ghost "Oh im fine , I just had a run in with Tina and she ran off thats all " he told her "Whats up with the moody cow this time " Belle butted in "Shes done a runner apparently " Nicole informed Belle "I swear that girl has issues " Belle sighed Tina sat on the river bank holding a burning photograph of Geoff and Nicole . "She can't have you .. This time I get what I want and she loses out....." Marc asks Belle to have dinner with him...Will she accept ? Or is she still hung up on Aden ? Nicole can't believe it when she bumps into her mother.... What is on Tina's agenda ?Is it Geoff or something much darker....
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Posted April 28, 2009 Liked Belle and Nic's girls talk.Geoff and Tina's confrontation looked in danger of getting out of hand and she doesn't seem to be the most stable of people.Was she lying about being pregnant or not? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Laura Posted April 28, 2009 Report Posted April 28, 2009 Great chapter Tina seems very unstable. I wonder if shes lieing about the pregnancy or not. I can't wait to find out what shes up to. Can't wait for more
lino Posted April 28, 2009 Report Posted April 28, 2009 great. I hope it will work out for Nic and Goeff.
-Kevin- Posted May 1, 2009 Report Posted May 1, 2009 Thanks for the comments guys I will definitely try my best to update later tonight
Slade Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 I really like the way you are portraying Geoff in this fic. A no nonsense attitude, and he appears to be not such a nice guy after all. He was about to turn nasty when Tina dropped the bombshell. I agree with an earlier comment about the talk with Belle and Nicole. It was good. It seems as though you are trying to write the characters in a slightly different way in which they are presented in the actual show. I’m presuming that Tina’s going to try and pull something at some point. To be honest I really liked the masked men idea you had originally and would have liked to see a continuation of that but I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the Tina, Geoff and Nicole love triangle. And I would like to find out more about her too.
-Kevin- Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 I really like the way you are portraying Geoff in this fic. A no nonsense attitude, and he appears to be not such a nice guy after all. He was about to turn nasty when Tina dropped the bombshell. I agree with an earlier comment about the talk with Belle and Nicole. It was good. It seems as though you are trying to write the characters in a slightly different way in which they are presented in the actual show. I’m presuming that Tina’s going to try and pull something at some point. To be honest I really liked the masked men idea you had originally and would have liked to see a continuation of that but I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the Tina, Geoff and Nicole love triangle. And I would like to find out more about her too. I was going to go down the horror move route but I think it was very unpopular when loads of people didn't read that 2nd chapter
tessalove Posted May 10, 2009 Report Posted May 10, 2009 i hope you update this soon, i cant wait to read more!!! xX
Emma Posted May 10, 2009 Report Posted May 10, 2009 Awesome chapter Kevin! I cant wait to read the next one Tina is very interesting.. Hmm
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