LAURZY! Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Awww poor Belle! Really glad Drew was there for her I love how you write the relationship between Leah and Drew, very sweet Cannot wait to read more Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Awww! Belle As others have said, am so glad that Drew was theere for her, and that he's kinda got her sussed. I wonder what'll happen when she wakes up? Drew obviously knows there's something going on, whereas I'm assuming Aden is totally clueless LOVED the beginning of this chapter too. The Leah/Drew interaction was beautiful, as well as your description of Drew's thoughts and feeling, esp when he was surfing. Can't wait for more now! :D Quote
~Zoe~ Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 This is really good Aw poor Belle Glad that Drew was there for her! Plus I liked the way you write the interaction with Drew and Leah Quote
Lise Posted May 4, 2009 Author Report Posted May 4, 2009 (edited) That was sooo good. It's good that Drew has noticed that there's something wrong with Belle since it seems everyone else is totally oblivious. The Drew/Leah scene was nice. It's nice that Dan gets a mention. Colleen's peice was well...very Colleen. I loved it! Oh, and Jen you are making me miss Drelle sooo much! It's all beautifully written, though. Edited May 4, 2009 by Lise Quote
matticus01 Posted May 7, 2009 Report Posted May 7, 2009 Quote “If he loves you, then he will stand by you.” Beautiful Jen, ever so beautiful and Drew is right at that! Quote Our noses touched first, sending a shiver up my spine. Then, our lips touched, as though we were both barely there. There was no fire or passion beneath the kiss, rather just a familiar scent and comfort from an old friend. It was like being welcomed home after a long time, but we both knew it wouldn’t last. OMG... the way you described it just made me think of the way Drelle used to be, ever so beautiful well done Quote
Lise Posted May 7, 2009 Author Report Posted May 7, 2009 They kissed It's nice that she still trusts Drew enough to tell him what's going on with her. I love the way you are describing their thoughts and feelings. Quote
LAURZY! Posted May 7, 2009 Report Posted May 7, 2009 Awwww that was so sweet I'm so glad she still trusts him and told him what was going on Cant believe it's nearly over! Quote
~Zoe~ Posted May 7, 2009 Report Posted May 7, 2009 That was a really good chapter, I'm glad she trusts him so she was able to tell him what was going on I like the way you have been writing their thoughts and feelings in this Quote
**Julie** Posted May 7, 2009 Report Posted May 7, 2009 Brilliant chapter Jen. I loved the way you wrote their thoughts and feelings. It's great that Belle still trusts him. Can't wait to read more. Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 7, 2009 Report Posted May 7, 2009 I knew that kiss was coming, lol, but it was way better than I thought. Actually, it toatlly reminded me of the old Drelle, as someone said, and that made it better. Loved that Belle was able to open us to Drew. They still have that connection/relationship, which is brill. Can't wait for more and to see where this is going to end, though I can't believe it's going to end too Quote
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