LAURZY! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Awww!! i hope Sydney's gonna be ok! The ending was so sweet Great update Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Hmm.Yeah, I guess that was inevitable.Hope Sydney gets better. Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 What a sweet ending to a great chapter! Poor Sydney though - I really hope she does get better soon. Can't wait for more. xoxo Quote
wrongturntaken Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Great chapter! It was so sweet and sad! Yay, they got back together, i think you did that perfectly, it felt right! Update soon! Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 omg, i luved it i thought it was brilliant!! Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Hi guys, I was just wondering if you people think I should continue writing this story.... I don't wanna waste my time writing something worthless. I loved reading your comments. But I just wanna make sure. Also what would you like to see more in this story? What bits do you like reading, I wanna write an enjoyable story not a boring story. Your feedback will hoepfully help me improve as a writer. Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 (edited) Hey Lily-G I really think you should continue this story. It's obvious that you are a very talent writer and have much more to offer as far as creative writing goes. I'm really enjoying this story and the approach you are taking with it at the moment. I really hope you continue this story as it is really interesting. Diabetes, although not a life - threatening disease, is still a very common disease out there. I think, in this story especially, you could write about how having diabetes is not the end of the world, as some people see it, that it's a disease that can be controlled and lived with. Both my Uncle and younger cousin have diabetes and it has never once stopped them from doing anything they want to do, as long as they control their blood sugar levels. You could use this story to help people understand a bit more about diabetes and what it's like to have it. I hope what I've written helps you make a decision. Either way, I've really enjoyed your story and I look forward to reading more from you in the future x x x x Edited January 19, 2009 by Adelle4eva!!! Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 I definately think you should continue, i love the way your writing it!! and this story is great! I'm looking forward to reading more about her diabetes and how it can affect people, cos i dont really know much about it! I love Aden and Sydney together, they are so cute! So, yeah, i hope you continue Quote
xknomex Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 I'm with the others, you really should continue with the fic! its brilliant!!!!!! I really love the stuff with Aden and Sydney, Sydney is the cutest. also her quips about Angelo Also Adelle always makes me happy xx Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 I honestly love this fic! It is very well written and it's a brilliant and original concept. Sydney is absolutely cute, and Adelle as parents are just adorable. Can't wait for the next update xoxo Quote
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