Unexpected (by adellejefferiesxox) - comments

[adellejefferiesxox]

Thanks Jen - spread the love

[**Julie**]

Loved the ending.

I'm so glad Aden got out of jail and was able to find Adelle. I loved the interaction between them at the end.

Hope to read more of your fics in the future.

[matticus01]

I'm so proud of you

You made my day

I loved that ending, it couldn't get anymore perfect, even if you tried, well maybe keeping Belle alive but still, a beautiful ending to a beautiful story

Well done!

[John]

A really well thought out ending. I really liked your descriptions of the feeling of love. It was also great to see that Aden and Belle's daughter actually returned to at least one of her parents.

Well done.

I look forward to what you are going to write about next.

John H

[~Zoe~]

That ending was really good

[adellejefferiesxox]

Aww thanks guys. You're too sweet

[amz89]

loved the end so adorable. Great fic this was.

[Red Ranger 1]

Caught up on those last two chapters and I've enjoyed this story, you took some very brave decisions and the title was very appropriate, almost every chapter seemed to have some shock.And you did a good job of having Aden make himself look guilty when we knew he wasn't.But if I'm brutally honest, I found the ending, with Aden seemingly kidnapping his daughter from the orphanage and going on the run, to be somewhat bittersweet.On the whole, though, a good story and thanks for writing it.

[adellejefferiesxox]

Aww thanks Some of those decisions were planned others were the spur of moment thing. For example I didn't plan on Adelle suffering from Epilepsy. I didn't plan on having Belle dying in her sleep, I think I wanted her to die on the beach in Aden's arms oh well

[amz89]

beautiful lily