matticus01 Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 And I was happy to know that you arn't brushing things under the carpet, well done That dont sound good but I cant wait to read it Thanks. Um if it's okay would you mind PMing about just telling me about the condition, I would love to hear from a who actually has it. So I can have a better understanding about the condition a bit better. If you don't that's perfectly fine, I understand Thank you so much to everyone who has commented on my last chapter, your comments were very touching and kind. I was very grateful, Taniya, Bec, Jen, Red Ranger! & people who I've forgotten or don't comment thanks for reading, you rock! I would love to, I will Pm you now Quote
amz89 Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 loved the aden n belle scene on the beach. Beautiful oh far out liam but silly. Love it more soon. Quote
mbi615 Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 Omg I wonder what happened to Liam. Aww really sweet when Aden said that Belle was beautiful, can't believe she though she was ugly! Great chapter. Quote
matticus01 Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 oh wow Lily-G that was amazing, welll done not too much description which is good. I kinda feel sorry for Liam in a way though Update soon Quote
Jen Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 Another great chapter, Lily . I certainly didn't see the end coming. Liam! I thought having lived his life in the public eye for so long he would have had a pretty thick skin, but maybe getting rejected by Belle is the straw that broke the camel's back so to speak. The awkwardness between Aden and Belle at this point is good. We can tell they want to be together, but circumstance and the fact that they are both so stubborn about getting back together is standing in their way. This is such an awesome line. In every chapter there seems to be one sentence that stands out to me ... I loved-love you so much it hurts being without you. It makes me sick! It makes me sick seeing you with Liam...or any other guy for that matter. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 (edited) Awww wow, like I said before Jen it's an honour whenever you comment (I know...I'm weird ) Edited May 12, 2009 by Lily-G Quote
John Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 Another really good chapter Lily. I like the way that you captured the desperation of Liam in a real understanding of people with addictive behaviour. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 Woah!Was not expecting that ending at all.How's Belle going to react now?Loved the conversation between Aden and Belle, I thought you captured their characters perfectly, and the same with Aden and Nicole. Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 12, 2009 Report Posted May 12, 2009 Oh, ok. Wow. Totally was not expecting that ending! Liam! I can't believe you've killed him off already... LOVED the scene with Belle and Aden on the beach. That was just so... wow. So powerful, and so, so heartfelt and breaking. Poor Belle. I can't believe she thinks/feels like that, but I guess some people simply do. Aden with Adelle was funny! Love them together. Too cute! Can't wait for more! Quote
Stephanie Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 (edited) Great chapter Steph! Poor Liam... I guess it was just too much after everything else. Aden and Belle need to get back together right now! The scene with Aden, Adelle and Nic was funny! Can't wait for the next update. Edited May 13, 2009 by drama_girl Quote
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