adellejefferiesxox Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Thanks guys I'll update later today Quote
Stephanie Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Wow! Enough happening in one chapter! Bet that footy players gf is the one alledging the assualt! Why can't they leave Aden alone? He's got enough going on between Belle and Adelle! Looking forward to another update! Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Oh gee, Poor... Everyone! I don't think there's one person here that isn't doing it rough Except for that stupid guy and girl I hope both Belle and Adelle are okay !! Loved it. Can't wait for more Quote
Jen Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Woah, talk about drama. Poor Belle. I think you got her reaction to the new spot on, and also how towards the end of the chapter she is dealing with it - almost to the point of denial. I wonder if they all know? Once again, you managed to get some humour into the situation too. “I have an idea....why don’t we all scream, it might make Nicole feel better” Geoff suggested dumbly. “You know what I’ve got an idea, how about I punch you in the balls, I think that will make me feel better” “Why are you attacking me?” Geoff complained. “Because you’re the one who knocked me up!” ^ That was awesome! I also liked the interaction between Aden and Angelo, that seemed very in-character too. This story certainly isn't short on stuff happening. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Woah.I had a feeling you were going to give Belle cancer and you played it very well.Bit of bad luck on Aden to have Angelo interrogating him, mind you I was surprised when he just let him go so it's obviously not that much bad luck. That last bit...was unexpected.But very funny. Quote
amz89 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 great chapter i hope belle tells aden soon because then they can be a family... Blonde cow leave aden alone more soon please. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Thank you very much Jen, Red Ranger and amz89. Glad you're liking it. But things still get worse Quote
amz89 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 dont like the sound of that.. hey sorry for asking you live local? i live in brissy 2 do u study? Quote
mbi615 Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 Woah, you're updating fast! Lovin' this fic and that chapter was really great except for the fact you gave Belle cancer . Anyways update soon!! Quote
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 19, 2009 Report Posted May 19, 2009 OHEMGEE. Poor Adelle And Adelle Jr. Yayz for Nic & Geoff and their little baby Vaughn (can't stand the name though ) Quote
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