Unexpected (by adellejefferiesxox) - comments

[KaiyaBlake]

^^

Oh god love honest people!

Gee wizz. Glad everyone's still alive... well, for now

Poor Belle, I don't want her to die! Don't make her die!

Loved it. Can't wait for more

[Taniya_K]

Belle! Oh, that sucks! I really hope that she's told Aden. And I really hope that there's some kind of miracle that lets her live!

Lol at Nicole giving birth. I could totally imagine her saying all that and threathening Geoff, hehe. Aw that she had a boy. I've always wondered what Nicole would be like as a mother, esp to a boy

Can't wait for more!

[-g-l-a-m-o-r-ous-]

This story is great! Did not expect Nicole to be pregnant! Can't wait for your next update

[adellejefferiesxox]

Vaughn (can't stand the name though

Oh!! It's from ALIAS! (my favourite show) - the name. Thank you everyone for your kind comments.

[John]

I like the really interesting death scene you have suggested with Belle dying in Aden's arms.

I'm not sure about your characterisation of Geoff but then I don't think the writers are really doing a great job with Geoff in the show at the moment.

I'll be really interested if you take the story on from here and explore Aden's reactions. After all he has lost quite a few people close to him.

Well done Lily.

John H

[matticus01]

awwwwwwwwwwwwww *cries*

that was so sad, and an interesting death scene which I must agree with john003au

Cant wait for more Lily-G

poor Aden

[amz89]

That was sad I wasn't expecting her to die so soon was thinking a couple more months yet.. more soon please cant wait.

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow.Seriously, wow.I was not expecting that at all, I was assuming it was just going to be a bog standard Aden/Belle reunion and then you went and pulled the rug from under our feet entirely.It was a great and really shocking moment even though we knew Belle was ill.

I can imagine Geoff being completely out of his depth with a baby and it'll be interesting to see where you take all the different plotlines now.(Wasn't the footie player called Mike or was that a different one?)

[adellejefferiesxox]

Wasn't the footie player called Mike or was that a different one?)

!!! Ah yeah.... if I named the guy Mike in the previous chapter Leon is Mike I forgot what name I used!!!! In saying that the name is not very important haha! Sorry I have alot going on at the moment (in my life) I forgot. I am

[Jen]

Woah. I certainly didn't expect that. I too thought you were going to properly reunite Aden and Belle before she told him - clearly I was wrong. I wonder how Aden is going to cope now? Not to mention he will have to raise a baby all by himself.