Inactive User Posted April 19, 2009 Report Posted April 19, 2009 Whoa this is gettng really good!! Update soon please!!!!! Quote
suzannelgnz Posted April 20, 2009 Report Posted April 20, 2009 Whoa that was fantastic Eli Can't wait to read what happens next. Quote
Jen Posted April 20, 2009 Report Posted April 20, 2009 Phew! I finally caught up. All the chapters have been so intriguing and interesting to read, that in my mind I was piecing together my own bits of the investigation . At first I thought maybe the use of the "he" to describe the attacker was a red herring and possibly Martha had something to do with it, but then there were all those interdispersed comments from the attacker's point of view that I actually began to suspect Hugo! Yay for me! Or maybe that is an attribute to your awesome writing style. I really like how you separate out all the different scenes so we see what is going on with all the different characters. My ultimate favourite line (from Chapter 2) “I’ll even make sure to treat you like a real lady and pick you up after work.” Quote
Bethan_Paige Posted April 20, 2009 Report Posted April 20, 2009 EEEEk Angelo and Joey are in danger! I hope Charlie and the others get to them in time Quote
Inactive User Posted April 20, 2009 Report Posted April 20, 2009 Great chapter. Hope Charlie get there in time to save her girlfriend. Update soon Quote
H&A_diehard Posted April 20, 2009 Report Posted April 20, 2009 AAAAAAAAAAAH! Why did you stop there? :o You do realise I have to go to work tomorrow, now how the hell am I meant to concentrate? Really can't understand why you don't like it, I'm on the edge of my seat. Quote
Jen Posted April 21, 2009 Report Posted April 21, 2009 Dum dum dum... Another cliffhanger. I can't believe it is all going to end soon. I really liked the scary interaction between Hugo and Joey. The likening of him to a child and a black and white view of the world was very poignant. Can't wait to read the ending . Quote
lozlovesh&a Posted April 21, 2009 Report Posted April 21, 2009 Please more now???????? That was fantastic! Quote
Barbara Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Posted April 21, 2009 You may not like this fic but we do. I still can't believe Hugo is the bad guy. Another cliffhanger! I want to know what happens next. I really hope Peter and Charlie will get to them before something bad happens. More please. Quote
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