On The Run (by matticus01) - comments

[Looptroop]

Brilliant chapter, too bad that somebody has to die. I hope that Charlie and Jack figure it out fast!

[Taniya_K]

You're kidding me right?! You can't end it there! Well, you obviously can, cos you did, but...

Another great chapter. Loved the flashbacks to see what had happened, and the dramatic hospital scenes.

I really dunno who's dead! I don't want it to be Belle, but I'm getting scared that it is!

Cannot wait for more!

[hitmanfan]

You can't leave it there!!

That's not fair.

Please update soon, (but it can be after the weekend as I won't have any internet connection before then )

[Inactive User]

I enjoyed the last two chapters! Wow it's really good and interesting. Wondering who died...

Update soon please. Don't leave us hanging in there!

[Looptroop]

I was so confused, at first I thought it was Belle, then I thought it was Luc and finally it comes out that it was Beth. You wrote it great, the tension was always in the air.

I really hope that Belle is okay.

Looking forward to the next one!

[~Zoe~]

I thought that it was Belle at first, and It was Beth..

Good chapter.

Looking forward to the next update to find out what has happened to Belle.

[~Zoe~]

That was a great chapter

You wrote the emotions about Matilda really well when Rachel was telling her about her mum.

& I'm glad the Lucas is okay, hope Belle wakes up from her coma soon

Good update

[Inactive User]

Wow beautiful chapter!

Sad Beth had died

Hope Belle better come out of the coma. Glad Lucas is okay

Update soon

[Georgia]

i just read ur entire story and it was amazing. i loved it all. please keep writing. i need to know when belle wakes up.

[KaiyaBlake]

Beth!? That was so unexpected!

I'm glad Belle and Lucas are alright though, well... Belle for now

Poor Mattie!

Loved it. Can't wait for more