becky_lacey Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Oooh, I am loving this fic. Liking the Belle and Mattie closeness, as well as then finding an attraction to Aden and Ric. Not liking the copper, he better not be informing the murderer about where Mattie and Belle are. Looking forward to more. Quote
LAURZY! Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 I've missed 3 updates!!! Sooooooo good, i am loving it I am so intrigued to read more and find out what's going on with that man I feel so sorry for the girls! Cannot wait to read more Quote
xknomex Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 I'm loving this fic!!!!! its sooo intriguing, i wanna know who that man is! love how you've bought Aden and Ric into it! brilliant! update soon xx Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 Hm... that copper is worrying me Hope we find out more soon! Anyways, the last two chapters were brilliant as always! Loved the description of Belle and Mattie's arrival in Summer Bay and SBH, with everyone's feeling and thoughts, not just theirs. I feel so sorry for them, having to be on the run all the time, and that they can't live life like normal teenagers. Like with boyfriends and all, esp now with Ric and Aden in the picture. And, on a very shallow note, that description of the boys on the baech was very Can't wait for more!! xoxo Quote
Lise Posted May 2, 2009 Report Posted May 2, 2009 I wonder what that cop is up to? I like Belle/Matilda's relationship. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with them and Ric and Aden. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 3, 2009 Report Posted May 3, 2009 This story is very different to the other fics I've read, I liked the banner and the wintess protection concept is a great one! I look forward to see what direction your taking this fic. Update soon Quote
**Julie** Posted May 3, 2009 Report Posted May 3, 2009 Brilliant two chapters. I wonder what the cop is up to? Can't wait to read more. Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 3, 2009 Report Posted May 3, 2009 Poor Mattie! If only life wasn't this hard for the two of them! Loved it as always! Their thoughts on everything was brill, esp Mattie and Ric's on each other. Lol at Belle almost hitting Aden. I know it's not supposed to be funny, but... Can't wait for more!! xoxo Quote
Looptroop Posted May 3, 2009 Report Posted May 3, 2009 This is my first post in the fic threads, and I'm amazed. Sure you've got the characters written for you already, but the storylines that you create are wonderful. The witness protection thing, wow. I hope the next chapters will be as good as the previous 4 have been. Quote
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