matticus01 Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 SNEAK PEAK: He sat on the bed, cradling her in his arms as she slept soundlessly into him. She was still wearing her purple dress and her hair was still done, she still wore her make up, but her black flats and her belt were sitting on the chair in the corner of the room. She was so beautiful. There was a gentle tap on the door as Aden took his gaze away from Belle and looked at the person entering. Rachel smiled as she closed the door behind her, holding a file in her free hand. She went and stood at the end of the bed and sighed as she saw Belle asleep. “I was hoping to talk to you both but this cant wait,’ she said as Aden looked worried at the tone of her voice. Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 Beautifully written! Can't wait, I'm excited Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 Great chapter, shocked that Belle's dead, really shocked that David's out again(and Amanda?!)and really, really shocked that Cassie actually is alive and it wasn't a hallucination or twin sister.Can't wait to see what you do next! Quote
~Zoe~ Posted June 10, 2009 Author Report Posted June 10, 2009 Aw, that was so sad with Belle dieing.. and they'd not long got married aswell Shocked about David, and that he's out and Cassie still alive. Brilliantly written Bec, looking forward to reading the part two of this chapter x Quote
Taniya_K Posted June 10, 2009 Report Posted June 10, 2009 Whoa, wow! I'm totally in shock about that chapter! I can't believe that Belle's gone, and that Cassie's not! :o I don't know what else to say. Brilliantly written, as always And cannot wait for more! xoxo Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 11, 2009 Report Posted June 11, 2009 Loved it, it was written brilliantly! I can't believe the last spoiler! Quote
Lise Posted June 11, 2009 Report Posted June 11, 2009 It's sad that Belle died not so long after they'd got married. Poor Aden! I wonder happened to Cassie?!?! What is Amanda up to? Quote
**Julie** Posted June 11, 2009 Report Posted June 11, 2009 Belle's dead. Poor Aden. Another brilliantly written chapter. Can't wait to read more. Quote
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 OMG! Belle! Nooo, how are Aden & Mattie gonna deal with this? You evil girly By the way, I'm back. Are you happy? *preens* Quote
matticus01 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 OMG! Belle! Nooo, how are Aden & Mattie gonna deal with this? You evil girly By the way, I'm back. Are you happy? *preens* Of course I'm happy your back Meggie Will have part 2 up soon Quote
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