Red Ranger 1 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 Good chapter, cute moment between Ric and Mattie.And Aden's really not coping...Not sure what to make of your teaser, seeing as how you brought Cassie back from the dead I'm not sure what to expect anymore. Quote
~Zoe~ Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Posted June 12, 2009 Good chapter, shame Aden turned up at the memorial service drunk, I liked the converstation between Mattie and Ric aswell Looking forward to the next update Quote
Lise Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 I loved the way you descibed the scene with Aden on the beach. The chat between Matilda and Ric was nice. It's a shame that Aden turned up to the Memorial Service drunk but he's clearly not coping with Belle's death so it's understandable, I suppose. Quote
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 That was a really well-written chapter as always Matilda seems to be coping better than I thought she would, unlike Aden. That was such a cute moment between her and Ric I miss Ric, btw. Aden I want to hug him. After all, there's no Belle round, right... *shiftyeyes* Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 Awwww pooor Adeny! *cries* beautiful chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 Great chapter. Poor Aden Loved the conversation between Ric and Mattie Yah a mention of Jarlie in this fanfiction Quote
HeavenForbid Posted June 13, 2009 Report Posted June 13, 2009 Wow, I just read this from start to (almost) finish It is amazing! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Quote
matticus01 Posted June 15, 2009 Report Posted June 15, 2009 Waits for a update!! Will have an update later tonight guys Quote
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