Luc Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Bec, you know I love everything you write, and this is no different. I've just read all the chapters you've posted so far, and you've written them beautifully. I really love the closeness between Belle and Mattie. I can't wait for an update Quote
becky_lacey Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 (edited) Poor Mattie, I feel so sorry for her, and Belle for that matter, but it's nice to see that through this whol ordeal they have a great deal of closeness and care about each other. Great writing, I'm entranced. Sorry about your break up. Edited May 4, 2009 by becky_lacey Quote
xknomex Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 another brilliant chapter!!! poor Mattie its so hard on them both :( cant wait to see how you develop everything! xxx Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Again, so, so I really feel for the too of them. Esp the fact that they can't have 'normal' lives, and how scared they constantly are. It's not fair... Loved that bit with Cassie and her father. It was a good insight to her family, and finding out her father's a cop made it interesting. Those two men in the park Scary. I hope they go after the wrong one first... But I dunno if that'll be the case! Can't wait for more!! Quote
LAURZY! Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Awwwww, the end was so well... the whole thing was really Loved the scene between Cassie and her dad Not liking the sound of those men! Really cant wait to read more Quote
xknomex Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 aw no poor Mattie and Belle!!!!!! I wanna give them a hug! Cassie and her Dad scenes were interesting... those men freak me out cant wait for more! Quote
Lise Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Two chapters for me to read I loved how you wrote Matilda freaking out in the previous chapter. Cassie's Dad is a little scary. I wonder if he has anything to do with those men in the park? Quote
becky_lacey Posted May 4, 2009 Report Posted May 4, 2009 Awww, so sad. All they want to do is have a normal life. Adam and Dmien hey, I am growing a dislike to them... Great chapter. Looking forward to more Quote
Inactive User Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 Great work! I am liking this story Update soon please. Witness protection can be scary-poor Belle and Mattie Quote
~Maddie~ Posted May 5, 2009 Report Posted May 5, 2009 so I've just read through this whole thing and its amazing. The way you describe Belle and Matilda's feelings is just so beautiful, and how you've gradually bought Aden, Lucas, Cassie and Ric back into the fic, there arn't many of those around atm, mostly Adelle, although Im not complaining its great so see something different I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this fic, and I noticed that in your signature, you are resuming "Just a flicker of hope" I will certainly be reading it! Quote
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