On The Run (by matticus01) - comments

[~Zoe~]

Got round to reading this fiction again, missed three chapters, and they were all great Bec.. this is a good fiction.

I liked the interaction with Cassie and her dad, he was a bit scary to her

& those two men in the park seemed scary

Looking forward to reading more

[Red Ranger 1]

Awww, loved that ending.Glad Ric told her that he knows and that she accepted him in.

[Taniya_K]

Eeeeeeeeeek! Go Ric! :D Glad that he's made the first move. Hopefully Mattie will give him a chance [even if it would be for his own good if she didn't...]

Poor Belle Getting choked to death by sand must suck. As well has having a hot guy like Aden have a crush on you, and vice versa, but not being able to do anyhting about it

Can't wait for more!!!

[~Zoe~]

Go Ric - I'm glad he made the first move with Matilda

Another good chapter

[Looptroop]

Another good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Edited May 6, 2009 by Looptroop

[LAURZY!]

Awwww yay for Ric!!!

I feel so sorry for both girls cos they cant have the one thing they want really

Cant wait to read more

[adellejefferiesxox]

I really like this fic Bec, its sooo interesting! Love the idea of wintess protection You're comin up with some clever ideas

[LAURZY!]

Absolutely LOVED the Aden and Belle scene

Ric and Mattie were so sweet too.... I hope she doesn't regret it!

Cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

[**Julie**]

Another amazing chapter.

Loved the scene between Aden and Belle.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Red Ranger 1]

Absolutely loved that scene between Ric and Mattie.Really hope she doesn't regret it!