KaiyaBlake Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 Oh no, things are getting worse! Not for Aden and Belle's relationship thought I'm glad they finally got together Love this. Can't wait for more Quote
Looptroop Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 I guess he really found them . But he seems to know a awful lot about them, is it someone close to them ? I hope Beth doesn't die, I think it would be to much for Mattie. A good chapter once again. Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 Whoa, that was a great, and eventful, chapter!! I can't believe that he's found them again. But I'm glad that they're not going to leave town again. I hope they fight, and win, this time. Racy fluff about says it all. You always write the intimate scenes so well. I don't think anyone does it better than you, with all the descriptions and lack of dialogue; you can almost feel their emotions. That ending! Who left that note, and who's at Beth's door? Scary that someone knew about Belle [it was Belle right?] losing her virginity the night before. Does that mean they're watching them constantly? Cannot wait for more!! xoxo Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 Woah.If that's the guy that's after them, then he seems to be a complete weirdo.Loved Mattie and Beth's reunion, hoping it's not going to be short lived...Also a bit confused as to whether that was Belle or Mattie that found the note, was I meant to be?Looking forward to more. Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 Beth!! Oh no, they are getting closer! Poor Belle, I would be so freaked out if someone knew that much about me! Hope they are all okay! Loved all the fluff in that chapter too Loved it. Can't wait for more Quote
LAURZY! Posted May 13, 2009 Report Posted May 13, 2009 AMAZING!!! The racy fluff Hellooooo!!! lmao Really liked the way you did that They've been found again OMG the ending!! It was just brilliant, the whole chapter was really Cannot wait for more!!!!! Quote
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Loved the last chapter, Belle & Aden = HOT!! Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Aw......! After everything in that chapter, that ending! Ok, wow. Another FANTASTIC chapter!! Where do I start?! I can't believe that the murderer is Belle's ex! Or that he killed her sister Or cheated on her, for that matter. I'm assuming, from the clues that you've left and the name, that this David dude is Cassie's uncle?. Will we find out why he killed her sister? Cassie! She was so brave to go back, but I can't believe she went on her own. Or that her father attacked her again. Beth, too! I hope she's alright. Was it David who attacked her too? The little bits of Aden and Belle, and Ric and Mattie were so cute. I love the little snippets that you include into the storyline. It makes it too sweet! Definately cannot wait for more, once again. xoxo Quote
matticus01 Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Aw......! After everything in that chapter, that ending! Ok, wow. Another FANTASTIC chapter!! Where do I start?! I can't believe that the murderer is Belle's ex! Or that he killed her sister Or cheated on her, for that matter. I'm assuming, from the clues that you've left and the name, that this David dude is Cassie's uncle?. Will we find out why he killed her sister? Cassie! She was so brave to go back, but I can't believe she went on her own. Or that her father attacked her again. Beth, too! I hope she's alright. Was it David who attacked her too? The little bits of Aden and Belle, and Ric and Mattie were so cute. I love the little snippets that you include into the storyline. It makes it too sweet! Definately cannot wait for more, once again. xoxo Thanks so much Taniya, there wont be another update as Im heading to bed, I'm so tired, and I have the flu! ! ! But I can tell you, David is in relation to Cassie, but you wont find out how until another couple of chapters And I'm glad you like the snippets Quote
Taniya_K Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 Aw, I hope you get well soon! Don't worry about us. I'm sure we can to cope without your updates for a little while Just focus on yourself for now xoxo Quote
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