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I may not comment on every chapter but I can assure you that I AM reading every chapter :D

I know this is soapland but I think I would have liked it to have been just a little more difficult for him to get out but its just my opinion and Im liking this, so, more please.. :)

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That was a great chapter. Jai's comment when he woke up was funny. Aden saved the day :) Can't wait for more.

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Righto, so I just read this fic from the beginning and I absolutely love it. I'm so glad that you brought Dom back into it. There's only one other fic that I've read with Dom in it, so it's a great welcome change, and you write it brilliantly! :D

So glad that they finally found Belle, but now the cops are going to send Aden back to jail, with probably a higher sentence for breaking out! :( That is, unless Dom confesses...

Cannot wait for more!

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That was really good, again. I liked the last scene with Belle and Aden. Good news about Geoff and I liked Miles in that chapter, too.

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That was another very good chapter. I really liked everything that happened in the first scene. Aden's free :D You had me worried there for a while that they were going to send him back to prison, though.

Can't wait to see what's coming up next.

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That was a really good last chapter. I really enjoyed it. I like how you wrapped everything up with Irene coming back. I liked the humour in it all.

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