Red Ranger 1 Posted June 4, 2009 Report Posted June 4, 2009 Ooh, also looking forward to the next one.Nice moment between Nicole and Belle as well. Quote
jdoddy Posted June 4, 2009 Report Posted June 4, 2009 I lost this fiction a bit - but I have found it and caught up with the chapters you have written since I last read it. I really like it, its punchy and powerful - has a few laughter moments - and a few moments when you want to punch characters in the back of the head. It's pretty well rounded and I can't wait to see where you take it next! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 12, 2009 Report Posted June 12, 2009 Loved that opening, with the flowers and the awkwardness between them.Lovely bit of banter.That ending with Roman was a shocker, hope he's all right.Looking forward to more. Quote
tessalove Posted June 15, 2009 Report Posted June 15, 2009 great chapter!! poor roman! and nic!! Quote
amz89 Posted June 17, 2009 Report Posted June 17, 2009 im not liking the sound of this i hope romans okay. he better not die. More soon please... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Posted June 18, 2009 Oh my.Hope Roman's okay but I'm not sure he is...Nicole asking Aden to be with her when she saw him was a cute moment, hope they're there for each other. Quote
tessalove Posted June 18, 2009 Report Posted June 18, 2009 Aww! Hope Romans ok!! Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Quote
EmmaJane123 Posted June 18, 2009 Report Posted June 18, 2009 Awwww Hope Romans Ok!!! Cant wait 4 the next bit Quote
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