Compelling Hearts (by haaxhaa) - comments

[rocknroll]

awww that was such a cute chapter!

hope they both sort it out!

i loved the bits betweeen kirsty and nicole, it was so sweet!

update soon please xx

[amz89]

wow its been awhile, i remember reading this when u started, i just read like 4 or 5 updates cant remember. Its early hours sorry. But I loved every bit of it. Poor Roman hope his okay. N aden n nic resovle things more soon please cant wait. Xx

[tessalove]

That was soo good!!!!!

I really loved it!!

[Red Ranger 1]

Hmm.To be honest, I'm not sure what to make of that.The ending, with Nicole too late to get back with Aden, worked, I thought(even if it maybe wasn't what I was hoping for...).I liked Aden opening up to her only for her to be unable to handle it and Aden's farewell to Belle was nicely understated, I can see it being like that.I think the problem might be that bit at the start.On the one hand, it's a good idea:We know right from the start how things worked out between Aden and Nicole and that informs the way we see their final moments together.But it possibly crams a bit too much informatiun in;we're told that Nicole got back with Geoff and Aden ended up with someone else but that's it, we don't know if they're happy or if they've just settled for second best.That could be considered a good thing, since it leaves the reader to make their own mind up, but I found it slightly unsatisfying.

Anyway, on the whole I enjoyed this fiction and I look forward to seeing more from you.

[haaxhaa]

Thanks for all the comments

Tessalove and RedRanger1 you've stuck with this fic since I think the beginning and I've taken all your comments on board and into consideration. All the comments have really made me continue with this fic as I was a bit > < at the start, so thanks

Edited August 13, 2009 by haaxhaa

[rocknroll]

loved the ending!! about him saying he loves her and the missing him as he goes!

great fics!!

well done xx