amz89 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 (edited) So sorry louise. Yeah Aussie is diff. I loved this chapter so perfect. Aden is cleaning up his life good on him, I wish he would do it in the show though =[ Edited August 23, 2009 by amz89 Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 I love this! Quote “No I didn’t mean that I can’t do it” she rambled looking to Aden for help. He looked back at her blankly and she wished she’d brought Geoff in with her. He would have known. Loved that part. It shows the connection she still has with Geoff I'm glad she chose to keep the baby too! Can't wait for more Quote
bradyell Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Posted August 23, 2009 Awwwwwwww! Really glad that irene and Annie were supportive, was worried that they wouldn't take it so well! Loved the last scene in Belle's room. Loved Nicole's honesty about how Belle would have struggled with the news had she been alive but i think she's right, Belle would be happy that Aden has somebody to love and focus his attention on. He's going to be a fab daddy And Harris Soooooooo cute Can't wait for more! Quote
Georgia Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 You've made me cry. That was so beautiful and sad. I wish I could write like that. Was that the last chapter ? If not then I can't wait until the next update If it was then it was a beautiful end to a beautiful fiction. Georgia x Quote
Louise_2983 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks guys No it's not the end, as ever my fiction has turned out longer than planned! So I think there's one chapter left but it could be two, And I'm also playing with the idea of an epilogue... Quote
tessalove Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 Amazing chapter!! Your wirting is so good! I mean it! Your amazing! I hope theres more soon!! X El Quote
MrsL Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 Wow what an amazing chapter. The last scene with Aden and Nicole in Belles bedroom was amazing. You are so talented I love this fic too. Looking forward to more Quote
Lise Posted August 23, 2009 Report Posted August 23, 2009 That was brilliant, as always. I was glued to it the whole time. The last scene was my favourite. Nicole said all the right things. It had a nice calmness about it which was good since it was in Belle's bedroom. I like Harris, as a name for the baby. Quote
bikinikill Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 Hey Louise. I love this, but you aren't finished with Sleeping Arrangements are you? I love them both, but admittedly sleeping arrangements is probably my favourite. I also loved the last scene in this where they were in Belle's room and Aden had found some closure. That was nice. And when Nicole understood that he needed his space, but that also they will be a family in a non traditional sense. Your writing is incredible but I'm pretty sure you know that. Quote
amz89 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 aww i loved that brilliantly cute. More soon please. Quote
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