The Darkness (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[pollymoon]

Glad they are talking again, what another great part, now they need to find Sam. Another great part

[TelephotoMarigold]

.So...just got to get Samuel back then.Right?

Yup and then this story will end.... no more updates.... you'll have to go read something else.....

The conversation between Ella and Mike and then the bit where she and Roman went to the children made me cry!

Ah Bless!! I didn't want to make you cry.... but then you did Kill Roman off once so that is fair.... Not that I hold grudges....!!!

Now would you like an update??

[Louise_2983]

Tickle wars! Too cute for words.

They need to get Samuel back soon.

[Red Ranger 1]

Awww, another really lovely chapter.Nice to see them interacting together as a family.

[pollymoon]

Really enjoyed that but would love now to see them get the baby back? any chance that might happen in the next chapter??

[Louise_2983]

Loved the bit with Ella and Nic, I love how close they are.

[Red Ranger 1]

^I liked that bit as well.Was not expecting all that with Louise.Really hoping they find Samuel soon.

[pollymoon]

Once again, a great part, wish they would hurry up and find samuel though

[pollymoon]

Oh Tele, 2 great parts, baby sam back where he belongs and it was great to see them doing normal family stuff again, was that the last part of this story, just seemed very final from the way the last line was.

[Red Ranger 1]

Brilliant last two chapters.Loved the chat between Ella and Louise, I really felt for both of them.I was wondering if that was the end as well although knowing you I'm not entirely sure the darkness really is over...