Set-Up (by Ashirr-Leigh) - comments

[tasha7905]

Great chapter. I'm so glad that Dani has said something. Post again soon!

Edited October 19, 2005 by tasha7905

[I love music]

Yay, I just knew Dani would do the right thing in the end!!! (I don't mean that I can predict your story, I just mean that's entirely in keeping with her character.)

As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

[I love music]

Another excellent chapter, Ashirr-Leigh. Very realistic dialogue.

[Jackieleanne]

Great chapter Ashirr-leigh. I hope things work out for them.

[iwasborn2try]

I've just read it all! (I'm new) and it's great!! You're really talented!

Thanks for posting it!!

Love Kate xxx

[Claire]

Awesome stuff! Had been waiting for that for yonks (the truth being revealed, that is). Great to see Kane released - can't help with the technicalities of the trial, being only three weeks into my law degree, but it sounded feasible enough for me!

I'm looking forward to seeing father and son reunited... and some more progress for Dani and Kane.

Can't wait for more!

[Murrin]

Did you start to write this before the story air in the Uk of Kane and his dad in the robbery? It is sort of similar to it but then different in a huge way. It is very good though, I like it!

[I love music]

Loved this fic, Ashirr-Leigh, it’s been gripping reading from beginning to end. The conversations and the way the characters behaved have always been very realistic. I never know what to write in reviews, but this story has been really good.

in a trial 15 years previously which had sent Richie Phillips to jail for the murder of his wife, Kane's mum

So he’s still called Richie, huh? Didn’t know just what I was starting way back when I gave Kane’s Dad a name...

[Ashirr-Leigh]

You made up his name? Ok, now I'm getting freaked out because I'm unable to tell the difference between fanfics and what happens in the programme! I just thought that was his name! Sorry for stealing it!

Thanks for the review though! I'm really happy with what you said about dialogue because that's the bit of the chapters that I always put most work in to. I'm not so good on the detail and things, I don't think, so hopefully the dialogue makes up for it!

[I love music]

You made up his name? Ok, now I'm getting freaked out because I'm unable to tell the difference between fanfics and what happens in the programme!    I just thought that was his name! Sorry for stealing it!

Thanks for the review though!    I'm really happy with what you said about dialogue because that's the bit of the chapters that I always put most work in to. I'm not so good on the detail and things, I don't think, so hopefully the dialogue makes up for it!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Sort of. Claire named him Ricky in her fanfic When Love and Hate Collide and I was going to ask if she minded if I used it too but for some reason I never got round to it (can’t remember why, it’s over two years ago) so I compromised and used Richie in Breaking Point and next thing I knew everybody was using it!!! H&A have finally given him the name Gus but I've made that his middle name/nickname. Same with his Aunt, I called her Rose and that's really caught on. Sorry if I’ve confused everyone but I’m flattered!!! Never did like the name Diane for his Mum tho, just couldn’t think of anything else. Don’t think anybody else did either, nobody’s copied that yet!!!

I really love your fics. The dialogue is always the best bit, but I think the stories flow and make fantastic reading. And there's nothing whatsoever wrong with the detail!